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September 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You have soooooo got to make another one, This one was awesome!!!!! awesome!!!!
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September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that was awesome!!! You should like totally make more of it.
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September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You should make another. Really.
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April 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I...really like this.
You've virtually kept lightning in character, yet also made her slutty. The promise of the orgy in the next chapter is probably hotter than the rest of this story put together though. Can't wait.
You've virtually kept lightning in character, yet also made her slutty. The promise of the orgy in the next chapter is probably hotter than the rest of this story put together though. Can't wait.
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April 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. It's a nice reminder that erotic fiction doesn't need to be devoid of warmth, humor, or characterization.
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March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! That was hot!
And just speaking for myself, but personally I squeed a bit at the Hope/Light direction this seems to be going in.
And just speaking for myself, but personally I squeed a bit at the Hope/Light direction this seems to be going in.
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March 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was hot lol. It was also hilarious how one moment Hope is begging Noel to move in and then the next it's all he can do to get him not to move in hahaha. I knew someone like that.
Pretty perceptive of Noel to pick out that Hope seems to have the biggest hots for Lightning :-p
Pretty perceptive of Noel to pick out that Hope seems to have the biggest hots for Lightning :-p
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February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see the sister's "Triple Threat"
I'm waiting for more! Please update as fast as possible!
I'm waiting for more! Please update as fast as possible!
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February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Triple Threat, rofl. That sounds like it should have been the name of a Paradigm Shift in the first game.
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February 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So lightning could give Hope a shot, huh? I loved this Lumina chapter. I still haven't played the third game but from trailers and all she does give the imp vibe. You put her antics to good use and I don't know how Hope resisted that. Excited to see how Lightning gonna crack that wall.