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for The Mad Dinner Party

by WonderMint

person Lina09
schedule April 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love this, I love this so much I had to make an account to tell you. I love how you write, it's so expressive. Just. Holy shit, thank you for writing. And thank you for writing this, specifically. I never knew how much I needed to see those two in a bed. 

person Morgana
schedule June 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most amazing pieces I have ever read. So much detail, the fact that everything isn't rushed makes this story so enjoyable to read. And I also I agree with others that there are not many Haurchefant stories out there. I really hope you haven't given up on this story. It would make my life complete to see it finish. Thank you so much for writing a story that Haurchefant and Aymeric deserves ;)
person Anon
schedule February 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the hottest pieces I have ever read, and I am so disappointed it's not completed yet! I love these two and I think your depiction of the WoL is enough that I can stay immersed in the story, but vague enough to project.
person Asami
schedule October 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that you didn't abandon this story. It was pretty much the hottest thing I read until now. Please send help. And I was just wondering what your thought on Estinien are, cause even though I think he's kind of a jerk (or because of it?) I'm quiet taken with him, and I can't find anything with him and the WoL and it's driving me insane and if you'll ever write something (with our other favourite elezen :]) I'll probably drown in my own fluids, but I'll do so happily. But the next chapter would be absolutly delicious, too.
person Daisy
schedule August 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story!! I love that you involved the player's character, that made all the difference ;D
I also love that you put so much detail into it, to make it believable instead of just rushing to the hot stuff. Talking of the hot stuff, I was upset that you ended it just as it was getting exciting! I really hope you're continuing with this story. I need to read more!!!
Please please add another chapter!
person Elo
schedule July 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i'm so bad at writing reviews but i llLLLOVEEEE this. i love your writing and i often check back to see if any of your fics have updated. playing through HW has cemented my adoration for all these lovely elves so it's super nice to see good smut of them. also, i really enjoy your characterization of the WoL as well! consider me a fan!
person Guest
schedule June 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You know, I've never reviewed a story on this site, at least not in recent memory. But I wanted to thank you. Not a lot of stories on here for FF14 and Haurchefant has been one of my favorite characters in the game, even despite the smooth talking pretty boy Aymeric. Just due to how he acts in game, shipping Haurchefant and the adventurer was a possibility on my mind. And after learning HW...well no spoilers but If you know it, you'll know more of my feelings on this story. Thank you again and I hope to see more of our erm...loving maniac.
person Yunachan
schedule June 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've became a fan of your writing since the first chapter of Bellyachin' but, seriously, this fic is too amuzing hahah well, it's almost like a terrible sin, knowing the characters and all, but that only makes it better. I love how you describe their actions in detail, not making it feel like you just want to rush I to action. And I obviously want to see more of this! Hahaha!!
person Lili
schedule June 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaahhhhh I wanted more! Why did you stop there!! Great story though... I looooove Harchefaunt and Aymeric.