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for Alpha Redux

by Seven

person Conejita de la Luna
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story...can't wait untill the continuation comes out...you are doing, right? RIGHT?!!
person Diane
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is by far the best FFX/X-2 fic I have ever come across. Your kept them all in character beautifully. The story had a wonderfull flow, and all the situations were so believeable, I was so sure I was reading a script from Square my self. Im an artist as well, and just recently posted a fan-art of Tidus I thought you might enjoy over on DeviantArt http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/37246811/ . (Most of my galley is Inuyasha based fan-art, but the older FFX stuff is back fom 2001, i just gave you the link to the one I had go the urdge to draw only a couple weeks ago). Call it my present to you for the wonderfull story you posted so people like me can read it! Thanks and Keep up the great work!
person Leviathan
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is bar none the best story about the FFX history I have ever read. I was personally blown away by all that work you put into it as well as the story as a whole. I enjoyed reading every single chapter from top to bottom and over again. This is a 5-star story that needs to be read by those that enjoyed FFX and X-2


Congratulations on a job well done. Yours truly

The Leviathan
person Anon
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story
person Strifey-kun
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you for writing this fic. I absolutely adore and love you. One of my favorite fics.....ever.
person Person
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice
person Punky Monkey
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is....WOW! This is one of (or may THE) best Y/T fics I have ever read! It was so well-written and had such a nice plot. It was IC and so cute to read. I just kept wanting more of it. And it made us laugh and smile, too. The sexual scenes were subtle, but that's what made us wanting more of it and made it even more sensual. It got us ready for the upcoming lemon story your making. I can't wait! I'm sure you'll be awesome at it! This was soooo good and I absolutely loved it! Please contiue to write. You have a lot of talent. I'll keep my eyes open for more of your fics. I think this is probably clean enough to post on fanfiction.net. Also, the ideas were very creative and you kept in touch with the game and had a lot of emotion and feel to it. I think that in the fame they really did love eachother that much. Yuna was a tad bit OOC, though. I couldn't really picture her personality in the story with the one in the games or picture that way with her voice, but, writing Yuna can be hard. Suteki Da Ne? Isn't it wonderful? It's so hard to find good Yuna fics with some sensuality in it. ^_^ Fabulous job!
person Kathleen
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, we all know, that your story is the best of all and I absolutely love it (and your other story too :-)), but that isn’t funny anymore! What’s about “Alpha Reduxxx: The First Of Many”? I know, you haven’t got much time to write, and yes, you need a break, but your story is so damn good and cute and romantic and it’s just horrible to wait for the continuation. And we’re waiting since 92 days for it! I’m begging you, please write!!! Or just SAY how long we have to wait anymore. Please!

*Kathleen*
person Juliet
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just read your fic and id like to say that it was fantastic^
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it acctually made me want to read on and i spent over 2 hours on it.
It never got boring and the plot was unexpected with a good ending.
well done, keep writing :)
person Emily
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Words are not enough to express what I'm feeling.... all throughout the game your feel like you personally know the characters... but through your story it seems more like CREACREATED the characters!!! They're sooooo perfecspecspecially Tidus *sigh*) and true to the game! I mean... this is better than most of the crap that's published every day! If I died and was transported somehow into the Yuna in your stories... that would be better than heaven by like 100000000! Tidus isn't real, he's technically not even real in the game... but... oh well. Basically what i'm trying to say is... YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER ON THE FACE OF THE EARTH! I know i've probably told you this like a bazillionmillionkajillion times... but i realized with horror i hadn't reviewed you on this site yet. Cassie wanted to write something too, but i basically said it all! =) Plus there's not enough room LoL well, have a happy rest of the year miss criminal justice! I'll be looking for your great works in the future!