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by FairyArmadillo

person SS
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's a great story. You wrote the characters so dead on. Excellent job!
person TheBlackRaveness
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. That was--incredibly--wow. I'm turned on by this. :-P

Auron really isn't an easy character to write in this perspective--but you captured him well--no beautifully, because I find it near impossible for even me to try to pair him with Tidus...I just ct ket keep our dear Aurrie Pah in character for that...but you...You did it perfectly! So beautifully! Details--everything. Yevon knows that my admiration for the pixels has grown beyond whatever I could imagine.

Kudos to you! I hope to see more of your work.

Lots of Love,
TheBlackRaveness
person Tampered Angel
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was sooooooooooooo good! I could keep my eyes off it! You are an excellent writer!! Tidus and Auron rock together.... ^^
person Kaia
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the only Auron/Tidus story I come across as yet. I must say it was very well done. I look forward to reading future pieces, as well. Again, well done!
person Celestial Fury
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this was really, really good. Lots of depth, lots of character, and very well-written. Lots of emotions.

I liked this! Very nice!
person E
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whee! That was fun and good. ^_^ I love your style.
person Nanjo Koji
schedule April 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. Simply, simply brilliant. Auron is an agonizing character to write, with all his pain and angst. You did it magnificently.

Oh... and the thing about the blitzball... I had a sudden flash of me missing the indicator during Blitzace, because I'm drooling over Auron, LOL...
person MagentaFox
schedule March 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, see, I love you for writing this. It's the only fic with this pairing and it was very well written. I like this pairing but to keep them in character is tough and Kudos to you foing ing able to do it so well. writee, Ie, I'd kill to see it!
person Jemariel
schedule February 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehehehe...yummers... ^_^ I liked the dynamic you had going between them. I like seeming role-reversals like that, where the one you'd think of as the bottom of a pairing ends up being the one in 'control.' The whoreatreathing thing was *genius.* (I haven't finished the game, just played enough so far to know the characters, so I don't know whether it's explained later in the game than where I am or no, but I'm guessing not dot doesn't seem importante enough to the story to be explained...) There was a lot in this fic that seemed to ring very true to the game. It was very easy to take the vein of this fic and link it directly into the game itself. Some fanfiction changes the spirit of the original fandom. This one didn't. I applaud you for that. Anyway. Hats off!
person Fira
schedule January 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
first. Yum.
next: why the power balance the way it was? auron as uke had me off a little once i'd finished reading.
but anway, still quite yum.
the breath withholding was quite kinky too ^^.