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for UnComfortable

by Hanakai

person DM
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Nice style... although I get a little lost as the characters are getting lost in their feelings all the time, but what the hell, that's what it's all about! XD
person Shan
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story confirms what I already thought in the privacy of my mind.
Seifer is the single most hottest, sexiest sweetest thing ever and Squall needs to take care of him!
No laughing in the back.
person Mya
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I almost cryed this is sad. U must continue u left it at a really interesting part.
person Shantal
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I read it first on FF.net, now I read it here and it is still as great as it was. I realy hope that you would finish this fanfiction. It deserves it.
person neophyte
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow...I like alot...that's kinda an understatement... I feel for Squall! I can't wait to read more!
person hopemia
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this!!!
Please continue soon!!!
person hopemia
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 is great.
I think Squall couldn't tell Seifer he loved him because he doesn't understand what love feels like.
It was a really sad chapter but hopefully it will be happier by the end.
person Guenhwyvar
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so...so sad. *sniffle* Poor Squall. I think he doesn't recognise his own love for Seifer, because hesn\esn't really know what lov love feels like. I liked the bit with Zell & Irvine, the outside pov makes it more interesting. But where's Seifer gone now? I have a feeling I'll be in tears before this is over...
person Herald Soucree
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. I imagine Irvine would be upset at Squall because he had played a lady's feelings (even if it's Rinoa). Eventually he come around and be happy for them. Zell would be in shock since his perspective of Seifer has been pulled inside out and some of Squall's as well. But since he loves Squall so much he'd have to give in. Between the two of them I think they would try to keep it a secret from everyone and confront Sei and Squall later. Keep going!
person Guenhwyvar
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Wonderful angsty, slashy, emotional SxS. I can't believe everyone's turned on Squall - the gang always back him up no matter what! That's a different take on post game SxS, I like it. A lot. Write more!!