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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a wonderful work, yet it hasn't been updated in 2 years! Maybe the release of Advent Children will reinspire you? I'm hoping so, anyway, because this is a well written, intriguing fanfiction! I just love how you portray Rufus! The spunky, overworked kid who is desperate for freedom and love...that is EXACTLY how I pictured his childhood to be like. I do agree with some other reviewers, though...I think we could potentially add the Turks in on this relationship...Tseng and Reno both seem like potential "homewreakers" for Rufus and Cloud's relationship. I'd be particularly interested in how Tseng might be portrayed in all of this...It does seem like he's ALWAYS around Rufus, and I do mean ALWAYS! He's probably there at their most intimate moments! Whatever you decide to do will be fine, though, because you are a GREAT writer, and I can't wait for another update! Please!!!!!!!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow i love this fic!!!! Please write more!!!
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Write more.
First off: great pairing. Rufus is far too underrated. And your Tseng is wonderous as well.
Loving the character convos at begiining and end.
Also, for the sake of amusement, have you considered adding another pairing? Like giving Tseng something to do besides haunt Rufus? ^.^
Keep going.
First off: great pairing. Rufus is far too underrated. And your Tseng is wonderous as well.
Loving the character convos at begiining and end.
Also, for the sake of amusement, have you considered adding another pairing? Like giving Tseng something to do besides haunt Rufus? ^.^
Keep going.
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh whoa. i think i have a new favourite author! congratulations, ryu-chan! you have won the first prize! *trumpet fanfare* very nice, i really liked it a lot. my boyfriend likes it too, so you'll have to update quick! good luck!
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November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WAHH!! ^_____^ I like it. alot. ALot ALOTTTT!! WAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Ya just GOTTA write more! Or or...put it up...or orororororsomething!!!!!!! <_< >_> please? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*grumbles* Whats gonna happen!?!? Well!?!??! Huh?!?/?!?!?! *stomps off to write more in her fanfic*
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August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I'm sorry, I haven't been here in a few days. Finally, I comment! Yay! Anyway! I love the lemon. It's fuggin' AWESOME! Must have more. Yep yep. But it would suck to get caught, no? And Reno... Bad Reno! Bad bad bad! hehe. Yay. Can't wait to read more! ^^
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August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ryu-Chan,
Man-o-man!!! I knew that Reno was going to be a bad ass, but I didn't expect him to be this bad from the start!!! I can't wait to read how Ruff and Cloud get out of this one. AWWWW!!! You already know that I think you have thought up the BEST PAIRING, but I just can't get over it!!! I love your story so much. You need to print me up the whole thing!!!! (You'd better, you little bitchwhore!) I'm sorry, I didn'allyally mean it, I think Sephy just took over my body. Tee Hee. Well NEWays, to all the people who have been giving Ryu a hard time about how she uses the word christ and such and how it doesn't go with there religion or whatever crap you bakas are saying, lighten up it's a story, not something that is ment to be politically correct, so just read her story, change your attitudes, and send Ryu nice reviews. Seriously, it's not that big a deal, and when was religion ever even mentioned in this story? Well, that is my piece, and if you disagree, what do I care, I don't know you. Again, Ryu, nice job on your story, I couldn't be happier or more proud of you! Much love, hugs and kisses
Kitsune-Chan
Man-o-man!!! I knew that Reno was going to be a bad ass, but I didn't expect him to be this bad from the start!!! I can't wait to read how Ruff and Cloud get out of this one. AWWWW!!! You already know that I think you have thought up the BEST PAIRING, but I just can't get over it!!! I love your story so much. You need to print me up the whole thing!!!! (You'd better, you little bitchwhore!) I'm sorry, I didn'allyally mean it, I think Sephy just took over my body. Tee Hee. Well NEWays, to all the people who have been giving Ryu a hard time about how she uses the word christ and such and how it doesn't go with there religion or whatever crap you bakas are saying, lighten up it's a story, not something that is ment to be politically correct, so just read her story, change your attitudes, and send Ryu nice reviews. Seriously, it's not that big a deal, and when was religion ever even mentioned in this story? Well, that is my piece, and if you disagree, what do I care, I don't know you. Again, Ryu, nice job on your story, I couldn't be happier or more proud of you! Much love, hugs and kisses
Kitsune-Chan
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August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That's just too awesome! I can't wait for you to post more! I absolutely love it! You really have a great sense of timing in terms of your element placement. Your a real inpiration!
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August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!
Ryu-Chan, I am so F**king proud of you!!!! Speaking of which, nice lemon.was was VERY impressed. I love your story so much, but you little bitchwhore, you didn't give me chapters 6 and 7 in advance. I am still a little irked at you, becauecause it was such a good story, lemon, and because it was written by you, I'll forgive you. (not that you really need my forgiveness, but things go better if you have it in situations like these.) What was I just talking about? NEWays, totally awsome story!!! It was rockin' the Casba, but please, let me know when Sephy comes in. I just know that you are going to make him a bad guy. And I'll call you later. I need to yell in your ear a little bit for not giving me your story ahead of time. THEN you will be forgiven. Well, much love, hugs and Kisses,
Kitsune-Chan
Ryu-Chan, I am so F**king proud of you!!!! Speaking of which, nice lemon.was was VERY impressed. I love your story so much, but you little bitchwhore, you didn't give me chapters 6 and 7 in advance. I am still a little irked at you, becauecause it was such a good story, lemon, and because it was written by you, I'll forgive you. (not that you really need my forgiveness, but things go better if you have it in situations like these.) What was I just talking about? NEWays, totally awsome story!!! It was rockin' the Casba, but please, let me know when Sephy comes in. I just know that you are going to make him a bad guy. And I'll call you later. I need to yell in your ear a little bit for not giving me your story ahead of time. THEN you will be forgiven. Well, much love, hugs and Kisses,
Kitsune-Chan
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August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
-Squeals- Yaaaay! They finally kiss! -cheers- Alright!! ^^ hehehe. -bounces- post soon! post soon! Listen to Sephy-sama! He tells it how it is.. hehehe. I SO love you! ^^ whee! More, more, more!!