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August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! cliffhanger, NO! oh... poop! please update soon? pretty please? i will buy you a cake if you do! ... ok, well, no i won't, but i might! PLEASE UPDATE! they're so cute!
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August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey there! great fic, i love your style of writing. it's great, only watch the word choice. sometimes the same word comes up in the same sentance more than once! yes, i'm a critic, but at least i'm a nice one. other than that, keep it up! totally love it!
Kairi
Kairi
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Itai!! Oh my gosh! Ebil cliffhangers! ls ols over- This is such a good story. Please... update soon! I so, so love this story. I can't wait for them to cuddle and all that... It's going to be cute, I know it! ^^
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh man, your story is SO CUTE! kawaii, kawaii! they make such a cute pairing. also, i've always seen Tseng as chinese, and didn't Cid and Barrett say "Jesus" and "God" in the director's cut of the game? *shakes finger at Carlyle* so picky! anyway, you must update fast! or else! i will find you and wring the next chapter out of your head if you don't! ... well, not really, but i can say i will! *says it again* tee hee!
again, i love it! add more, onegai!
silver yami
again, i love it! add more, onegai!
silver yami
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story is pretty good so far. The only thing that irked me is that you described Tseng as Chinese and one of the boys said the word "Jesus". China and God don't exist in the FF7 world. My advice is to keep your eye out for little things like that and edit the first chapter.
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August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I STILL love this story! You really should update quicker! I love it! Love it, love it, love it! ^^ Aww... write more soon PLEASE!
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August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww! So Kawaii! This reminded me of me when ever I have a friend coming over whom I haven't seen in ages! I can't wait to find out what the two will do now that their back together! I do have a question, just how long is Clouds hair? In the game it was kinda shortish, about a little longer then shoulder-length, when he left for SOLIDER, then what we all know after. :lets out a half giggle half chuckle sound: Anyway! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!! Write more! It's so cute! ^^ I was giggling and smiling the whole time, it was that adorable! You must update and FAST!