FFX-HS
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Final Fantasy X › Het - Male/Female
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Adult ++
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Final Fantasy X › Het - Male/Female
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
2
Views:
1,424
Reviews:
15
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own Final Fantasy X, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Dramatic Entry
My pen name here is MattFoley and the story you’re reading is called “FFX-HS.” The story you’re not reading is “Final Fantasy High School” by Kenji, published 31 December 2004 and most recently updated on 7 March 2005 (my checking).
If that’s what you came here to read, I’m sorry, but that’s not this story.
“Final Fantasy High School," as of when I last checked it, wasn't porn yet. If you’ve read what I’ve posted and what Kenji’s posted, you doubtlessly have noticed that nowhere in Kenji’s (very good) story is a cumshot. “Final Fantasy High School” is a good story and you should probably go read it sometime.
That is, of course, unless you’re here to read sex scenes. As I already said there aren’t any in “Final Fantasy High School” but my story “FFX-HS” is a hardcore porn story, so it's rather rife with them.
I realize how coming out with a Final-Fantasy-X-as-set-in-a-high-school story awhile after Kenji did makes me look and hate it. I hadn’t seen it or even its title before Wolverine’s Bitch left me a surprisingly shortsighted and funny though unnecessarily rude review – she read the summary and title of my story, not the story. I wouldn't say that because anyone who’d read the story regardless of their intelligence would see Tidus ejaculating on Yuna’s face and go, “Wait, Kenji’s story is much more tasteful than that...and Yuna and Tidus aren’t a couple in her story yet!” Admittedly that’s only two differences, but you get the idea.
So, after I got the review I found that Bitch, indeed, hadn’t made up “Final Fantasy High School” merely to insult me.
Kenji and my stories' summaries are too much alike. I don’t like comparing myself with him because we’re different porn authors, but that’s true. My FFX high school story summary reads like Kenji’s story’s, except with the wording changed just enough to make it suck, then much more insight into its rating and a cameo note. The cameos will happen, by the way.
Kenji emailed me recently. Long story short, I was wrong. Sorry if I've offended you, and I'm certainly sorry to Kenji.
Kenji said, "You have to let people know what's going to be in your story ahead of time, not as you go along. Especially when it's yaoi. Do you know what yaoi is? That's guys fucking guys. A lot of people don't like that, even on adultff.net. If you spring it on them instead of warning them ahead of time you're going to get bashed and your fic is going to get bashed. The fic is eventually going to have yaoi and lemon in it (hence the NC-17 rating). You can't spring gay sex on people. It just doesn't work." I believe his saying his story was porn and not a teen comedy, though I can't back that up. My point is that Kenji's story is a teen drama that's not reached a sex scene.
That’s where I come in, because my story is a porn story. I'm going to do what little I can toward making the characters from FFX act like they really would - I'm not using that as an excuse so you won't flame me, but if you see a character saying something they wouldn't, that's why. I'm trying to remember whatever character traits I can. I'd read Kenji's story to get that kinda stuff down, but I won't read it because I don't want to let his story influence mine. I've skimmed it, though. Anyway, should I make a mistake, let me know what's wrong and I'll change it gladly.
As I said earlier, “FFX-HS,” my story, is a hardcore porn story, with orgies, double penetration, threesomes, oral sex, cumshots and whatever else I think of.
I’ve read a few fictions here. A large variety of things inspired me to write this story, but here are the stories on AFF.net that did, or helped with the decision on something (and they’re basically all the stories on the site I’ve read):
“Pep Talk” by BitterRoot (FFX)
“DOA: Sibling Rivalry” by ZealWarrior (incest/rape disgusts me, but it was well-done, dammit) (Dead or Alive)
“On the Night of the Storm” by wierdmeijin (sic) (I don’t like the immature stuff, but I love the one-room one-scene one-style idea, and the DOA women need more porn to be dedicated to them) (Dead or Alive)
“Love for Her” by Katu (it’s true there’s no story, but it’s also incredibly well-done) (Resident Evil)
“Selphie’s Lesson” by Deathstalker (I’ve never liked snuff, rape or general sex that isn’t consensual and still don’t, but if the idea in this – rape – changed to consensual group sex or maybe not harsh gangrape it’d be great) (FFVIII)
“Sharing is Fun” by big hairy lesbian (I only really read the first two chapters because I was researching something on Google simultaneously when I read the story, but it’s very well-done, and needs more than 405 hits (my last check) and zero reviews (also my last check)) (Fear Effect)
Onto chapter one.
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_--Something That Had Nothing At All to do With Sex--_
He didn’t really expect it this time.
Tidus’d been watching something that had nothing at all to do with sex with his girlfriend – the girl he loved – Yuna and suddenly she was damn near tearing his pants open.
Not that he didn’t like watching the shortish-ashy-blonde-haired Yuna pull his penis out into the open. At 7" Tidus didn’t have much to his name, but he didn’t feel small, either. He assumes it’s 6-1/2" and Yuna thinks it’s 7" or 7-1/2" but he’s too afraid it’ll be shorter than 6-1/2" he won’t let her measure it, which is what she wants to do if only to shut him up.
It never seemed that long until Yuna practiced deep-throating it. He had wanted her to swallow down all of his penis since they first started groping one another, but he’d never force her to. Fortunately she insists upon practicing.
It wasn’t easy, either, Tidus thought, watching his manhood harden. Yuna was playing with its partially-limp form still; if Tidus weren’t so horny what she was doing would likely make him laugh, especially whenever she slapped it somewhere.
Though he was watching his Yuna prepare to fellate him, Tidus couldn’t look at her in that perspective and not picture in montage form their work to teach Yuna how to deep-throat his penis. For him, that meant getting thrown up on – visually and physically, at least. Mentally it was pain. Whenever she threw up he had a lot of trouble getting off, which in itself is assuming that he did. Yuna’s skills weren’t that great, but her conviction and, he assumed, love for him had pulled him through more than a few extreme turn-offs.
Finally it was erect. Not completely, but enough for Yuna to move on from the hardening process.
He was really glad he hadn’t told her about how tantalization would probably help to please him. Yuna opened her mouth as widely as she could and tried to pull his balls in – couldn’t, but she inhaled one and tickled the other. While she did that Yuna kept a hand on the inside of his thigh and one at the base of his cock. She was sitting next to him on a couch. Tidus was flad he hadn’t told her to tease him noe because if he had she’d only be suckling on and tickling his balls, which somehow would feel better than that in addition to being held.
At least to me, Tidus thought. Some girlfriends of his had tried techniques on him he’d hated because their old boyfriends liked it, or a friend’s boyfriend and so on.
After she gained an involuntary moan from Tidus, Yuna, pleased with herself, held onto his balls with one hand, put the other on top of his sitting thigh and began licking over Tidus’s penis, looking straight into his eyes. That made him a little uncomfortable but it turned him on too, and knowing she’d be doing everything in her power to please him soon was somewhat of a relaxant, and he was fine.
After snaking a crisscross of saliva over his penis in a few slightly-too-fast passes, Yuna briefly took it into her mouth – not as much as they both knew she could, which was mostly all of it – but a little over an inch.
With that firmly enveloped, Yuna started sucking as hard as she could, then paused, inhaling hard. Tidus swore he heard a soft moan but it was probably just a breathing noise. Thinking she could possibly get orgasmic cuzza this’s stupid, he thought. Tidus watched, trying to figure out her pattern. Usually – a term he used somewhat loosely because she’d only sucked him off about eight times – she’d inhale while she sucked, taking small occasional breaths instead of taking long pauses like she did now. He figured, now, that a break would probably make him come quicker, because anticipating the next suckle would add to his overall excitement.
He wouldn’t be telling Yuna that anytime soon, though.
Speaking of Yuna, he thought, having missed about 10 seconds of her handiwork, which in this case was literal.
Tidus felt an incredible sucking sensation on the head of his penis, as well as a slowly-moving and tightly-squeezing hand that was moving on all the surface her mouth wasn’t covering. The other hand was gently cupping his balls, the thumb robbing over one of them.
Through more observation, Tidus learned she was sucking and inhaling at nearly the same time, but normally when she did that she didn’t do much more than hold onto him or any stabilizer.
Minutes of this later Tidus got mad. If she got another 30 seconds of this he’d explode down her throat...
...Without having made her come and without having lasted long, or at least enough time to not be ashamed of it. He’d looked at his clock when she started – 3:20 p.m. – and it just turned to 3:28. Even if he told Yuna not to do much he’d blow soon, but a total break would buy him a while, even deny it.
Tidus pushed Yuna’ head off himself with both hands, softly, but they could both tell she wouldn’t be able to fight the hands and win. She made a surprisingly loud smacking disconnection noise and he saw the glint of a fine line of either saliva or precum connecting his cock to her bottom lip. Her hands completely stopped moving, as confused as she was. Tidus had to explain this soon, but before he spoke he pictured blowing his load on her face. Something about her lips was so attractive they made him want to finish himself off right now, but his will won. “Your turn,” Tidus said, to his baffled beauty.
“No,” she said, knowing she’d lose the argument but letting him know how she felt anyway. She looked too turned-on to articulate that better.
“Yeah. I wanna go down on you.”
“Not until you come on me.”
ON her? Tidus thought, shocked. Don’t you always say that’s too messy? While he thought that Tidus said, “No way. You first.” After he said that he thought, Aren’t you supposed to welcome my wanting to eat you out?
“Well let me 69 you,” she said.
“Hell no. This’s all you,” Tidus said. He hadn’t realized until now that he’d stood at some point. Tidus pulled Yuna to her feet with a hand of hers she’d placed on his hip, then walked her so her back was facing the couch. Along the way she grabbed at his penis and bumped into it and him a few times, solidly, but he never gave in.
“Are you sure?” she asked, sounding a little afraid, though he couldn’t even guess why.
“Yeah. You’re gonna come before I do.”
“Well I was already close to...there. This’s pointless. I’ll just get there while I’m working on you, Tidus.”
Tidus thought Just say “come!” “Maybe,” Tidus said. “I’ll find out after I come you were lying. I’m not gonna let that happen.”
“Well...dammit, Tidus, lemme blow you.”
“No,” Tidus said, kneeling in front of her. She sat down. Is she pretending this’s against her will or something? he wondered. She began to struggle a little when he began to part her legs – she wouldn’t let him open her, hooking her legs together at her feet. Then she accidentally kicked his penis – Though with shoes on she might never know that, he thought, unable to get the thump noise out of his head.
“Honey,” Yuna said.
“What?” he asked, shocked by how she wasn’t moving now.
“Did I just kick you...down there?”
“Yeah.”
“You should prob’ly let me make it feel better.”
“You’d do it again, wouldn’t you?” Tidus said, then thought, Fuck I shouldn’t’ve said that!
“Just let me blow you!”
“Sorry,” Tidus said, standing again. She looked up at him slightly too innocently, but then again that was her nature. “What’s so bad about me wanting to go down?”
“Nothing, I just didn’t really want that.”
“...Wow,” he said, watching her assume the position at her knees directly in front of him.
He hadn’t been paying attention to it, but his penis was limp now, and Yuna immediately began to flop it around as she’d been doing earlier, doing whatever she could think of to harden it. Then he thought about closing the deal. “Hey, should you take your shirt off?” he said.
“I don’t really think I need to,” she said.
I’ll show you mine and you won’t show me either of yours? Damn, he thought. “Will you do it for me?” he asked.
She grinned, then stood and peeled her shirt up from the bottom, where it almost didn’t cover her pants. He helped, and saw the creamy skin below, penis flinching at it, it seemed. He couldn’t let his eyes linger so he followed her shirt’s progress. It was a tightish white featureless cap-sleeve T from a website he’d forgotten, but seconds after the process began whether the shirt had a graphic on it didn’t matter, because she’d dropped it, to put both hands on Tidus’s face and kiss him.
She seemed to have a passion for kissing him – she did it often, though Tidus didn’t find himself using his tongue much while she also did, and here he not only used his tongue but used it a lot. Yuna pulled back a little from his head, redeploying a hand to his cock. While that hand beat him off she battled tongues with him partially inside and partially outside of their mouths.
His taste fresh with her, Yuna dropped to her knees before Tidus and found a reinvigorated penis eagerly awaiting her. She already knew it was hard again, but something about seeing it helped. Her mouth obliged quickly and she’d buried most of it in her throat with a speed he hadn’t often seen her exercise. He wanted to equate the feeling he got from how startling that was but couldn’t, which irritated him. Then he paid more attention to Yuna.
She made her index finger and thumb a ring at the base of his cock, sliding her head onto and very nearly off of his penis moderately quickly, squeezing his penis as paced with his heart beat in it – she'd squeeze right after she felt it throb.
Tidus noticed how turned-on she was – after she did that for a few seconds she let out a quiet but loud, desperate-sounding moan, and started working faster. She forgot about her hair, which she’d been careful to keep out of her face until then, and went crazy on his cock. She’d been staring at him but now he couldn’t see her eyes, which he suspected were still open. In fact, after a few seconds of not being able to see her eyes, her hair parted a little because of a sudden, random-looking jerk in her body, and her darkish blue left eye appeared again, staring straight at him.
After a few seconds none of the things he’d been afraid of mattered anymore. He watched his girlfriend’s head bounce on his penis, slicked and shiny with saliva, and watched her hands clench and squeeze, and watched her back, which he saw whenever she was leaning all the way forward, naked save a single thin horizontal bra strap and the two obligatory vertical ones. He wanted to tear it off and titty-fuck her, but –
Tidus felt a clenching, an intensely pleasurable painesque sensation, deep in his cock, behind it, one he knew and didn’t know, a burning, even, a warning to him and only him to prepare for the inevitable forthcoming events –
“I’m gonna come,” he said, pulling Yuna’s head off him. Her hands took over the work and his stayed out to the side. Yuna looked between his eyes and his penis, whose veritable eye looked like it was blinking. A bead of precum dripped out and she committed a thumb to rubbing it out all over his penis’s head.
The burning became more, the clenching intensified, it hurt – but it didn’t hurt, it couldn’t hurt less, it felt so fucking great –
“Oh! Oh fuck...”
– Tidus couldn’t keep quiet, he had before, but this was too good. He could swear it made a squirt noise but maybe it didn't – his pure, delightful, uncut-coke in the snow white cum roared and tore out of his cock, slapping its way onto Yuna’s face, but some of it hit the hair that was blocking her face – neither of them remembered that being there – his hands were fists and he felt the muscles in his groin all clenching.
Yuna fought how the cock tried to twitch, spewing in protest, and she kept aiming it at her, sliding her hands on it still –
Again Tidus’s penis spat, his stringy cum going the distance, the too-short inch or two between her face and his cock – he could shoot feet into the air before the cum even dropped and had before – and without error hitting Yuna in the eye she’d just closed – the first shot’d hit her square in her slightly-parted lips, spreadout the way it was because she’d been pulling him down then – she looked like somebody’d whipped her in the mouth with cum, it was another white snake too long to’ve come from inside of Tidus –
But nothing went to waste. Yuna never let him hit the same spot twice, though she might not’ve been trying to aim him at all. He hit her right cheek, at an angle that made the highly-pressurized cum streak from where her cheek met the corner of her now-open mouth to her ear – did it go into her ear or just hit it? He couldn't tell.
Tidus didn’t get to think about that, though, because the fourth snake of semen splooged out after less than a second of re-targeting that Yuna didn’t consciously do and hit her upper lip and nose, spreading and sluicing into her mouth without hesitation, then slowing immensely, just like the fifth shot that came out of his cock angrily, envying how the first four got to dirty up the girl’s face before it.
Tidus grunted more loudly than he wanted to or could control with every shot, every stroke of the too-much-like-a-sloppy-paint brush cock giving Yuna’s face a sticky, filmy, hot and viscous second coat. His hands were covering hers now, on his penis, and they weren’t moving anymore, just squeezing as each jet of cum left him –
“Ohhhhh!”
– But then Yuna came too, unabashedly staining the crotch of the olive drab cargo pants she was wearing, ones Tidus loved the way her ass looked in, letting go of her boyfriend’s still-unloading cock a few seconds after he started unloading to deal with herself –
– Tidus lost control a little, wanting to keep splattering on her face and missing, overpowered with the extreme pleasure – he didn't know she was coming too but didn't think it was possible – his hands must’ve followed his eyes. He lost an entire shot to her mouth, firing just before a screeching orgasmic verbal explosion of hers – she swallowed it, making a noise without meaning to – without thinking – and then called out.
“Tidus!” She sounded like she wanted to say something coherent but couldn't, it was just an unexpected yelp from an unexpected orgasm.
Then he hit her upper chest with his cum, cycling his hands over his cock – “cycling” sounded right somehow – he shot at her nipples too, hitting the right one solidly, his almighty cum strings thinning, shortening, as did their frequency – he didn’t impress too many girls with his size, but when he came on them and they felt like their face was sliding off, he never stopped coming, they always had to ask if he’d ever stop – Yuna was moaning a lot like he was, coming.
He grabbed her left nipple, the one without cum on it, right after he shot the right one, and another cum spurt left him, hitting her between her breasts though neither of them really noticed that one until later –
Yuna grabbed a hold of him again with her spare hand, the other digging into her pants, feeling herself orgasm, glad to prove Tidus wrong –
He hit his own hand, dammit. It was really hot and made the four fingers that it didn’t hit feel cold by comparison.
He had just enough time to put his last few shots into her mouth – she guided him, but was a little off – some cum hit her bottom lip so he adjusted his aim, her hand working with his, and put his other hand back on his cock.
“Oh my god,” one of them said.
“Oh!” the other said.
He kept squeezing himself, splashing cum into her mouth, and she helped with one hand, the other busy now that she’d gotten it into her pants – she had to unfasten the button at the top and unzip them but it was worth the time it took.
Tidus, with Yuna, kept working on him for minutes after both their orgasms were over, and she brought juices from her vagina into play, wanting to interact with all the cum she felt sliding over her. Her entire face felt like it was moving. She noticed she had a lot of hair sticking to her face, and he noticed it too, she wanted that to happen – did he?
They didn’t know how long they went on like that, but at some point they stopped with Tidus blushing and saying, “I hadn’t noticed this until now, but I really hafta pee.”
If that’s what you came here to read, I’m sorry, but that’s not this story.
“Final Fantasy High School," as of when I last checked it, wasn't porn yet. If you’ve read what I’ve posted and what Kenji’s posted, you doubtlessly have noticed that nowhere in Kenji’s (very good) story is a cumshot. “Final Fantasy High School” is a good story and you should probably go read it sometime.
That is, of course, unless you’re here to read sex scenes. As I already said there aren’t any in “Final Fantasy High School” but my story “FFX-HS” is a hardcore porn story, so it's rather rife with them.
I realize how coming out with a Final-Fantasy-X-as-set-in-a-high-school story awhile after Kenji did makes me look and hate it. I hadn’t seen it or even its title before Wolverine’s Bitch left me a surprisingly shortsighted and funny though unnecessarily rude review – she read the summary and title of my story, not the story. I wouldn't say that because anyone who’d read the story regardless of their intelligence would see Tidus ejaculating on Yuna’s face and go, “Wait, Kenji’s story is much more tasteful than that...and Yuna and Tidus aren’t a couple in her story yet!” Admittedly that’s only two differences, but you get the idea.
So, after I got the review I found that Bitch, indeed, hadn’t made up “Final Fantasy High School” merely to insult me.
Kenji and my stories' summaries are too much alike. I don’t like comparing myself with him because we’re different porn authors, but that’s true. My FFX high school story summary reads like Kenji’s story’s, except with the wording changed just enough to make it suck, then much more insight into its rating and a cameo note. The cameos will happen, by the way.
Kenji emailed me recently. Long story short, I was wrong. Sorry if I've offended you, and I'm certainly sorry to Kenji.
Kenji said, "You have to let people know what's going to be in your story ahead of time, not as you go along. Especially when it's yaoi. Do you know what yaoi is? That's guys fucking guys. A lot of people don't like that, even on adultff.net. If you spring it on them instead of warning them ahead of time you're going to get bashed and your fic is going to get bashed. The fic is eventually going to have yaoi and lemon in it (hence the NC-17 rating). You can't spring gay sex on people. It just doesn't work." I believe his saying his story was porn and not a teen comedy, though I can't back that up. My point is that Kenji's story is a teen drama that's not reached a sex scene.
That’s where I come in, because my story is a porn story. I'm going to do what little I can toward making the characters from FFX act like they really would - I'm not using that as an excuse so you won't flame me, but if you see a character saying something they wouldn't, that's why. I'm trying to remember whatever character traits I can. I'd read Kenji's story to get that kinda stuff down, but I won't read it because I don't want to let his story influence mine. I've skimmed it, though. Anyway, should I make a mistake, let me know what's wrong and I'll change it gladly.
As I said earlier, “FFX-HS,” my story, is a hardcore porn story, with orgies, double penetration, threesomes, oral sex, cumshots and whatever else I think of.
I’ve read a few fictions here. A large variety of things inspired me to write this story, but here are the stories on AFF.net that did, or helped with the decision on something (and they’re basically all the stories on the site I’ve read):
“Pep Talk” by BitterRoot (FFX)
“DOA: Sibling Rivalry” by ZealWarrior (incest/rape disgusts me, but it was well-done, dammit) (Dead or Alive)
“On the Night of the Storm” by wierdmeijin (sic) (I don’t like the immature stuff, but I love the one-room one-scene one-style idea, and the DOA women need more porn to be dedicated to them) (Dead or Alive)
“Love for Her” by Katu (it’s true there’s no story, but it’s also incredibly well-done) (Resident Evil)
“Selphie’s Lesson” by Deathstalker (I’ve never liked snuff, rape or general sex that isn’t consensual and still don’t, but if the idea in this – rape – changed to consensual group sex or maybe not harsh gangrape it’d be great) (FFVIII)
“Sharing is Fun” by big hairy lesbian (I only really read the first two chapters because I was researching something on Google simultaneously when I read the story, but it’s very well-done, and needs more than 405 hits (my last check) and zero reviews (also my last check)) (Fear Effect)
Onto chapter one.
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_--Something That Had Nothing At All to do With Sex--_
He didn’t really expect it this time.
Tidus’d been watching something that had nothing at all to do with sex with his girlfriend – the girl he loved – Yuna and suddenly she was damn near tearing his pants open.
Not that he didn’t like watching the shortish-ashy-blonde-haired Yuna pull his penis out into the open. At 7" Tidus didn’t have much to his name, but he didn’t feel small, either. He assumes it’s 6-1/2" and Yuna thinks it’s 7" or 7-1/2" but he’s too afraid it’ll be shorter than 6-1/2" he won’t let her measure it, which is what she wants to do if only to shut him up.
It never seemed that long until Yuna practiced deep-throating it. He had wanted her to swallow down all of his penis since they first started groping one another, but he’d never force her to. Fortunately she insists upon practicing.
It wasn’t easy, either, Tidus thought, watching his manhood harden. Yuna was playing with its partially-limp form still; if Tidus weren’t so horny what she was doing would likely make him laugh, especially whenever she slapped it somewhere.
Though he was watching his Yuna prepare to fellate him, Tidus couldn’t look at her in that perspective and not picture in montage form their work to teach Yuna how to deep-throat his penis. For him, that meant getting thrown up on – visually and physically, at least. Mentally it was pain. Whenever she threw up he had a lot of trouble getting off, which in itself is assuming that he did. Yuna’s skills weren’t that great, but her conviction and, he assumed, love for him had pulled him through more than a few extreme turn-offs.
Finally it was erect. Not completely, but enough for Yuna to move on from the hardening process.
He was really glad he hadn’t told her about how tantalization would probably help to please him. Yuna opened her mouth as widely as she could and tried to pull his balls in – couldn’t, but she inhaled one and tickled the other. While she did that Yuna kept a hand on the inside of his thigh and one at the base of his cock. She was sitting next to him on a couch. Tidus was flad he hadn’t told her to tease him noe because if he had she’d only be suckling on and tickling his balls, which somehow would feel better than that in addition to being held.
At least to me, Tidus thought. Some girlfriends of his had tried techniques on him he’d hated because their old boyfriends liked it, or a friend’s boyfriend and so on.
After she gained an involuntary moan from Tidus, Yuna, pleased with herself, held onto his balls with one hand, put the other on top of his sitting thigh and began licking over Tidus’s penis, looking straight into his eyes. That made him a little uncomfortable but it turned him on too, and knowing she’d be doing everything in her power to please him soon was somewhat of a relaxant, and he was fine.
After snaking a crisscross of saliva over his penis in a few slightly-too-fast passes, Yuna briefly took it into her mouth – not as much as they both knew she could, which was mostly all of it – but a little over an inch.
With that firmly enveloped, Yuna started sucking as hard as she could, then paused, inhaling hard. Tidus swore he heard a soft moan but it was probably just a breathing noise. Thinking she could possibly get orgasmic cuzza this’s stupid, he thought. Tidus watched, trying to figure out her pattern. Usually – a term he used somewhat loosely because she’d only sucked him off about eight times – she’d inhale while she sucked, taking small occasional breaths instead of taking long pauses like she did now. He figured, now, that a break would probably make him come quicker, because anticipating the next suckle would add to his overall excitement.
He wouldn’t be telling Yuna that anytime soon, though.
Speaking of Yuna, he thought, having missed about 10 seconds of her handiwork, which in this case was literal.
Tidus felt an incredible sucking sensation on the head of his penis, as well as a slowly-moving and tightly-squeezing hand that was moving on all the surface her mouth wasn’t covering. The other hand was gently cupping his balls, the thumb robbing over one of them.
Through more observation, Tidus learned she was sucking and inhaling at nearly the same time, but normally when she did that she didn’t do much more than hold onto him or any stabilizer.
Minutes of this later Tidus got mad. If she got another 30 seconds of this he’d explode down her throat...
...Without having made her come and without having lasted long, or at least enough time to not be ashamed of it. He’d looked at his clock when she started – 3:20 p.m. – and it just turned to 3:28. Even if he told Yuna not to do much he’d blow soon, but a total break would buy him a while, even deny it.
Tidus pushed Yuna’ head off himself with both hands, softly, but they could both tell she wouldn’t be able to fight the hands and win. She made a surprisingly loud smacking disconnection noise and he saw the glint of a fine line of either saliva or precum connecting his cock to her bottom lip. Her hands completely stopped moving, as confused as she was. Tidus had to explain this soon, but before he spoke he pictured blowing his load on her face. Something about her lips was so attractive they made him want to finish himself off right now, but his will won. “Your turn,” Tidus said, to his baffled beauty.
“No,” she said, knowing she’d lose the argument but letting him know how she felt anyway. She looked too turned-on to articulate that better.
“Yeah. I wanna go down on you.”
“Not until you come on me.”
ON her? Tidus thought, shocked. Don’t you always say that’s too messy? While he thought that Tidus said, “No way. You first.” After he said that he thought, Aren’t you supposed to welcome my wanting to eat you out?
“Well let me 69 you,” she said.
“Hell no. This’s all you,” Tidus said. He hadn’t realized until now that he’d stood at some point. Tidus pulled Yuna to her feet with a hand of hers she’d placed on his hip, then walked her so her back was facing the couch. Along the way she grabbed at his penis and bumped into it and him a few times, solidly, but he never gave in.
“Are you sure?” she asked, sounding a little afraid, though he couldn’t even guess why.
“Yeah. You’re gonna come before I do.”
“Well I was already close to...there. This’s pointless. I’ll just get there while I’m working on you, Tidus.”
Tidus thought Just say “come!” “Maybe,” Tidus said. “I’ll find out after I come you were lying. I’m not gonna let that happen.”
“Well...dammit, Tidus, lemme blow you.”
“No,” Tidus said, kneeling in front of her. She sat down. Is she pretending this’s against her will or something? he wondered. She began to struggle a little when he began to part her legs – she wouldn’t let him open her, hooking her legs together at her feet. Then she accidentally kicked his penis – Though with shoes on she might never know that, he thought, unable to get the thump noise out of his head.
“Honey,” Yuna said.
“What?” he asked, shocked by how she wasn’t moving now.
“Did I just kick you...down there?”
“Yeah.”
“You should prob’ly let me make it feel better.”
“You’d do it again, wouldn’t you?” Tidus said, then thought, Fuck I shouldn’t’ve said that!
“Just let me blow you!”
“Sorry,” Tidus said, standing again. She looked up at him slightly too innocently, but then again that was her nature. “What’s so bad about me wanting to go down?”
“Nothing, I just didn’t really want that.”
“...Wow,” he said, watching her assume the position at her knees directly in front of him.
He hadn’t been paying attention to it, but his penis was limp now, and Yuna immediately began to flop it around as she’d been doing earlier, doing whatever she could think of to harden it. Then he thought about closing the deal. “Hey, should you take your shirt off?” he said.
“I don’t really think I need to,” she said.
I’ll show you mine and you won’t show me either of yours? Damn, he thought. “Will you do it for me?” he asked.
She grinned, then stood and peeled her shirt up from the bottom, where it almost didn’t cover her pants. He helped, and saw the creamy skin below, penis flinching at it, it seemed. He couldn’t let his eyes linger so he followed her shirt’s progress. It was a tightish white featureless cap-sleeve T from a website he’d forgotten, but seconds after the process began whether the shirt had a graphic on it didn’t matter, because she’d dropped it, to put both hands on Tidus’s face and kiss him.
She seemed to have a passion for kissing him – she did it often, though Tidus didn’t find himself using his tongue much while she also did, and here he not only used his tongue but used it a lot. Yuna pulled back a little from his head, redeploying a hand to his cock. While that hand beat him off she battled tongues with him partially inside and partially outside of their mouths.
His taste fresh with her, Yuna dropped to her knees before Tidus and found a reinvigorated penis eagerly awaiting her. She already knew it was hard again, but something about seeing it helped. Her mouth obliged quickly and she’d buried most of it in her throat with a speed he hadn’t often seen her exercise. He wanted to equate the feeling he got from how startling that was but couldn’t, which irritated him. Then he paid more attention to Yuna.
She made her index finger and thumb a ring at the base of his cock, sliding her head onto and very nearly off of his penis moderately quickly, squeezing his penis as paced with his heart beat in it – she'd squeeze right after she felt it throb.
Tidus noticed how turned-on she was – after she did that for a few seconds she let out a quiet but loud, desperate-sounding moan, and started working faster. She forgot about her hair, which she’d been careful to keep out of her face until then, and went crazy on his cock. She’d been staring at him but now he couldn’t see her eyes, which he suspected were still open. In fact, after a few seconds of not being able to see her eyes, her hair parted a little because of a sudden, random-looking jerk in her body, and her darkish blue left eye appeared again, staring straight at him.
After a few seconds none of the things he’d been afraid of mattered anymore. He watched his girlfriend’s head bounce on his penis, slicked and shiny with saliva, and watched her hands clench and squeeze, and watched her back, which he saw whenever she was leaning all the way forward, naked save a single thin horizontal bra strap and the two obligatory vertical ones. He wanted to tear it off and titty-fuck her, but –
Tidus felt a clenching, an intensely pleasurable painesque sensation, deep in his cock, behind it, one he knew and didn’t know, a burning, even, a warning to him and only him to prepare for the inevitable forthcoming events –
“I’m gonna come,” he said, pulling Yuna’s head off him. Her hands took over the work and his stayed out to the side. Yuna looked between his eyes and his penis, whose veritable eye looked like it was blinking. A bead of precum dripped out and she committed a thumb to rubbing it out all over his penis’s head.
The burning became more, the clenching intensified, it hurt – but it didn’t hurt, it couldn’t hurt less, it felt so fucking great –
“Oh! Oh fuck...”
– Tidus couldn’t keep quiet, he had before, but this was too good. He could swear it made a squirt noise but maybe it didn't – his pure, delightful, uncut-coke in the snow white cum roared and tore out of his cock, slapping its way onto Yuna’s face, but some of it hit the hair that was blocking her face – neither of them remembered that being there – his hands were fists and he felt the muscles in his groin all clenching.
Yuna fought how the cock tried to twitch, spewing in protest, and she kept aiming it at her, sliding her hands on it still –
Again Tidus’s penis spat, his stringy cum going the distance, the too-short inch or two between her face and his cock – he could shoot feet into the air before the cum even dropped and had before – and without error hitting Yuna in the eye she’d just closed – the first shot’d hit her square in her slightly-parted lips, spreadout the way it was because she’d been pulling him down then – she looked like somebody’d whipped her in the mouth with cum, it was another white snake too long to’ve come from inside of Tidus –
But nothing went to waste. Yuna never let him hit the same spot twice, though she might not’ve been trying to aim him at all. He hit her right cheek, at an angle that made the highly-pressurized cum streak from where her cheek met the corner of her now-open mouth to her ear – did it go into her ear or just hit it? He couldn't tell.
Tidus didn’t get to think about that, though, because the fourth snake of semen splooged out after less than a second of re-targeting that Yuna didn’t consciously do and hit her upper lip and nose, spreading and sluicing into her mouth without hesitation, then slowing immensely, just like the fifth shot that came out of his cock angrily, envying how the first four got to dirty up the girl’s face before it.
Tidus grunted more loudly than he wanted to or could control with every shot, every stroke of the too-much-like-a-sloppy-paint brush cock giving Yuna’s face a sticky, filmy, hot and viscous second coat. His hands were covering hers now, on his penis, and they weren’t moving anymore, just squeezing as each jet of cum left him –
“Ohhhhh!”
– But then Yuna came too, unabashedly staining the crotch of the olive drab cargo pants she was wearing, ones Tidus loved the way her ass looked in, letting go of her boyfriend’s still-unloading cock a few seconds after he started unloading to deal with herself –
– Tidus lost control a little, wanting to keep splattering on her face and missing, overpowered with the extreme pleasure – he didn't know she was coming too but didn't think it was possible – his hands must’ve followed his eyes. He lost an entire shot to her mouth, firing just before a screeching orgasmic verbal explosion of hers – she swallowed it, making a noise without meaning to – without thinking – and then called out.
“Tidus!” She sounded like she wanted to say something coherent but couldn't, it was just an unexpected yelp from an unexpected orgasm.
Then he hit her upper chest with his cum, cycling his hands over his cock – “cycling” sounded right somehow – he shot at her nipples too, hitting the right one solidly, his almighty cum strings thinning, shortening, as did their frequency – he didn’t impress too many girls with his size, but when he came on them and they felt like their face was sliding off, he never stopped coming, they always had to ask if he’d ever stop – Yuna was moaning a lot like he was, coming.
He grabbed her left nipple, the one without cum on it, right after he shot the right one, and another cum spurt left him, hitting her between her breasts though neither of them really noticed that one until later –
Yuna grabbed a hold of him again with her spare hand, the other digging into her pants, feeling herself orgasm, glad to prove Tidus wrong –
He hit his own hand, dammit. It was really hot and made the four fingers that it didn’t hit feel cold by comparison.
He had just enough time to put his last few shots into her mouth – she guided him, but was a little off – some cum hit her bottom lip so he adjusted his aim, her hand working with his, and put his other hand back on his cock.
“Oh my god,” one of them said.
“Oh!” the other said.
He kept squeezing himself, splashing cum into her mouth, and she helped with one hand, the other busy now that she’d gotten it into her pants – she had to unfasten the button at the top and unzip them but it was worth the time it took.
Tidus, with Yuna, kept working on him for minutes after both their orgasms were over, and she brought juices from her vagina into play, wanting to interact with all the cum she felt sliding over her. Her entire face felt like it was moving. She noticed she had a lot of hair sticking to her face, and he noticed it too, she wanted that to happen – did he?
They didn’t know how long they went on like that, but at some point they stopped with Tidus blushing and saying, “I hadn’t noticed this until now, but I really hafta pee.”