Taming the Fates Amidst Chaos
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Chapter 27
'Internal thought'
'CHAOS SPEAKING'
~ (Time and/or story focus shift)
Chapter 27
Somewhere deep inside, he knew that he should be at least a little worried. There should be fear of the claws, metal or real, that ran so smoothly over his heated flesh, leaving a path of stinging cuts. He should be afraid of the white fangs following the thin trails of blood left behind by the claws. Though he knew he should feel these things, in all honesty, Yazoo didn't give a shit about what he should or shouldn't be feeling. Those devilishly pointed fingers sent electrifying shocks through his body, causing him to writhe and beg for more. That fiery mouth devoured his dwindling self-control, leaving him little more than a quivering mass of lust.
Sin fought to restrain himself with each sweet cry that left the silver-haired man. Never had he desired to bring pleasure to another so strongly. He knew how to allow others to take their pleasure in him and how to give them their completion quickly, but strangely he wanted to draw this out. Each wave of lust that emanated from the slender Remnant sent a fiery burn to his awakening erection. It took every bit of control he had to not ravage and perhaps harm the beautiful figure beneath him. The sweet flavor of Yazoo's skin mixed with the richness of his blood was like the strongest aphrodisiac to the collared man.
As he brought himself lower down the slender torso, Sin became aware of a small problem. In order to continue his explorations of the silver-haired man, he would have to unwrap his tail from the pale wrists it held together. As the slave paused in his ministrations, Yazoo cracked open a single blue-green eye and sent a pleading look to the dark haired man. "Sin, I...I promise I won't move my hands. Just please...don't stop," He panted.
Sin nodded silently at the desperate plea, curious to see how long the Remnant would be able to hold to his promise. Slowly, he unraveled the purple appendage, allowing the soft fur to tickle the sensitive skin. Slender fingers twitched, urging to hold onto something, but Yazoo held himself. Deciding to test his 'captive's' resolve, Sin leaned down once more, biting harshly on a hardened nipple. A loud cry escaped the silver-haired man and he arched up but still managed to keep his wrists crossed.
Nonetheless, sharp teeth maintained their delicious torture of the sensitive nub. A golden claw trailed upward and mimicked the same treatment on the other, much to the delight and dismay of the young Remnant. The twin sensations felt wonderful, but his erection was becoming uncomfortably hard. He desired release badly but didn't want too lose this nearly overwhelming pleasure. All too soon, a familiar tightening coiled itself in his belly and he felt as though his body would shatter if the building pressure wasn't released soon. Sin understood the desperation in the younger man's movements and decided to provide him with a rather...unique experience. His now unoccupied tail slowly crept between their bodies.
Yazoo nearly exploded as the soft warmth to the furry tail wrapped itself firmly around his aching arousal. He knew he wouldn't last long as the furred appendage spiraled his length, expertly twisting and stroking him to the brink. With a loud cry, his vision turned white as his body shook from the waves of pleasure. Somehow though, he still managed to keep his hands above him.
Admittedly impressed with the younger man's control, Sin waited until the Remnant stilled before pulling away and unwinding his tail from the softening flesh. He looked at the creamy white fluid clinging to the purple fur curiously. He knew he would need to clean it but did not wish to go through the tedious process of cleaning and drying the fur in the river again. Nodding to no one in particular, he quickly sat on the edge of the large boulder and began removing the cooling cum from his tail.
After he slowly drifted down from the afterglow, Yazoo opened his eyes and sat up, quickly seeking out the collared slave. The sight that greeted him caused him to pause for a moment before letting out a small laugh. Sin held his own tail and was cleaning it with his tongue! When the Remnant's laugh reached him, he paused and tilted his head in curiosity. Yazoo couldn't help himself, with the tail cleaning and that curious gaze, it wasn't hard to imagine this collared creature as a house cat and he laughed even harder.
Sin did not understand what the pale-haired man found so amusing but he enjoyed the heartfelt sounds. Instinctively, he understood that it was a rarity with the young Remnant and he was pleased that somehow he had caused it. His first priority was always to please his Master, and though he did not belong to this long-haired one, he was still to treat him with the same respect. He turned his attention back to his tail for a moment but, satisfied that it was clean, he let it go and faced the slender man. The amusement in those vibrant, blue-green eyes had faded to something far more intense, a deep searing hunger that seemed undiminished by his recent orgasm.
The dark look reminded the slave forcefully of his own ignored desire but he mentally shoved it aside. His orders were to sate the silver-haired man's needs, not his own. A low chuckle resonated in his mind. 'FOOLISH SERVANT. DO YOU NOT SEE IT IN HIS EYES? IN ORDER TO SATISFY THE LITTLE SHINGA-CHI, YOUR OWN DESIRES WILL BE TENDED TO SEVERAL TIMES BEFORE THIS NIGHT IS THROUGH.' As the demon continued to howl it's laughter, Sin noticed blue-green eyes looking at him expectantly, standing at the far end of the boulder.
"Are you coming?" Yazoo asked, a subtle, teasing emphasis on the last word. Without waiting for an answer, the slender man turned away and lept for the nearby shore. Sin quickly made to follow, gathering his powerful legs beneath him before hurtling into the air. A sudden impulse struck him and he immediately decided to go with it. After all, he was only following his orders.
Yazoo had nearly landed safely on the dry bank when a clawed hand grabbed his arm and he was thrown back into the air. A shocked cry escaped him before Sin caught him, wings beating steadily. "Sin! What are you doing?!"
"You told us to surprise you."
"Well you did! You can put me down now," Yazoo squirmed a little in the collared man's arms. He felt mildly embarrassed at being cradled like a child and even more so in the fact that a large part of him just wanted to snuggle closer into the embrace.
"Are you so sure you wish us to let go?"
The silver-haired man almost immediately said yes but he paused and took the time to look down. His already pale skin turned two shades whiter when he realized that the thin glimmering line below them was the river they had bathed in moments earlier. Normally heights did little to daunt him, after all, he was bred and trained to withstand a lot more than any ordinary person. However, they were now well beyond what Yazoo believed to be his body's limit and knew that if he was dropped, he wouldn't be walking away from the landing. "Um...maybe not."
Sin felt a small amount of amusement at the slight waver in the young man's voice. He shifted his grip, allowing the Remnant to slide to a more vertical position. The pale hands immediately clamped down on the metal arm around his chest as the furry tail wrapped around his waist in extra support. Sin leaned his head forward and spoke softly into Yazoo's ear, "Afraid that we will drop you?"
"No, I have just never been this high up before without being in an airship. I trust you."
What was it about those three words that made him want more than what he deserved, to have this beautiful, willful, trusting creature as the one he called Master? Why couldn't he simply empty his thoughts and feelings on anything but Master's will like he had before. The winged man did not like being confused or unsure when it came to himself, it was a sure sign of weakness.
Yazoo allowed himself to become lost in the amazing view. If he looked to the south, he could just barely make out the small glow from the lights in Edge. The waxing moon and starlight bathed the large forest beneath them in a soft glow and, for a moment, he thought he could see a glimmer from their camp where Loz slept. He turned his gaze back to the alluring, dark-haired man that held him and gifted him with a rare smile.
Sin lost all thoughts as that single expression transformed the Remnant's face from beautiful to something indescribably breathtaking. He would deal with his own problems later. First, he had orders that needed to be completed.
Yazoo's world was literally turned upside down as Sin's wings stopped moving and they began to plummet head first. Before long, his sight was blocked by a layer of red as the leathery wings were wrapped in a cocoon around the two men. Though his stomach seemed to have shifted to his feet and his heart raced madly, the Remnant found himself laughing at the sheer excitement. The laugh faded into a moan as sharp teeth nibbled at the nape of his neck. The red shield burst open with a rush of wind and the two men were flipped upright and pulled to a stop with only a few feet between them and the ground.
Yazoo felt a momentary appreciation for Sin's control of the situation but let it go as he became reminded of a large erection pressing against his backside. 'It's a good thing I brought supplies. He is a little bigger than Loz and it would hurt if I wasn't prepared.' He scanned their surroundings and was pleasantly surprised to find that they were very close to the spot they had left their clothes, "I say we move this to a more solid surface, hm?"
He was given no verbal answer but soon found his feet touching cool grass. He pulled out of Sin's tight embrace and walked over to the bundle of black clothing, quickly removing a small clear container from one of his pockets. Yazoo was glad that he had thought to grab the skin oil from Vincent's things. More than likely the gunman used the clear fluid on the area where his arm and the metal claw connected, but the Remnant had a very different idea in mind.
Sin followed after Yazoo and was surprised when the man suddenly turned and pounced on him. Training instinct told him to submit and so he allowed himself to be pushed back onto the ground without a fight. He knew that he was going to be rewarded for his actions when the Remnant took his aching arousal in hand. He had to bite back a moan at the delicious caresses and nearly lost it anyway when he was suddenly encased in warm wetness.
Daring to look down, the collared man was shocked to find Yazoo sucking and bobbing as though the hard cock was a favored treat. As a low moan left the Remnant, Sin also became aware that the silver-haired man was fingering himself, thrusting two of the slender digits in time with his mouth. As scarlet and black eyes watched the impossibly erotic scene, a third finger was inserted and a loud moan vibrated through his erection and into his blood. Sin fought to get control of himself quickly.
Yazoo opened his eyes and immediately slowed his eyes as he became aware of the desperation in the collared man's eyes. 'No use ending this before it gets good.' He pulled away for a moment and slowly removed his fingers from himself, allowing the tension to ease slightly. As Sin's breathing calmed, Yazoo crawled up and straddled the slave as he sensually rocked his hips, causing them both to groan at the friction. Deciding that he had had enough with teasing, he shifted upward and rocked back, feeling the hard crown press against his entrance. He leaned in close to the flushed face beneath him, his silver hair falling loosely around them, and hissed passionately, "Fuck me till it hurts."
Something seemed to snap in the slave and Yazoo felt clawed hands grab tightly onto his hips as he was pulled down sharply. He let out a loud scream as waves of pain and pleasure twisted maddening inside him. The thrusts came hard and fast and it was all the Remnant could do to simply hold himself up. Placing his hands on the firm chest below him, he dug his nails in as his prostate was hit, his vision flashing white, "Oh fuck yes! Just...just like that!"
The collared man seemed to understand as the sensitive gland was unerringly hit again and again. Yazoo could feel himself reaching the edge and cried out as he was suddenly flipped onto his back. The hard thrusts picked up in speed and the Remnant's body soon stiffened immensely as his orgasm rocked through him. As his body relaxed, Sin's motions slowed to a stop and Yazoo found himself able to return to higher thought processes. 'Damn, he didn't even have to touch me.' He shifted slightly on the uneven ground and came to a shocking realization. Sin was still hard! He glanced down to find a ring of purple surrounded the winged man's erection. Blue-green eyes glared into scarlet and black, "You used your tail as a cock ring? Why?"
"We must follow Master's orders. You can still walk."
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A/N: Finally! The long awaited lemon! Woot! Hope it wasn't too rushed for you guys
SapphireDog
*whimper* but...but..so close dammit...so damn close! your almost there! gah! ALMOST THERE!!!!!! *whimper*
Frizz: I know, I'm evil. But you love me anyway right?
Kuragari
XD so very true darling. don't worry about it, I like this chapter anyway. hmmm... oddly enough I'm beginning to REALLY like Chaos. XD. keep 'em coming! see you soon ;)
Frizz: So why are you only now beginning to like Chaos? Curious minds must know!
Ainaloth
Oh I really do like where this is going! ^.^
Frizz: I hope you also like where it ended up
Anonymous Sister of the Author
...you...you *sniffles* ...you don't LIKE ME ANYMORE!!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! i feel soooooooo unloved!!!!! you didn't even WANT to reply to my last review!!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!! YOU LIKE SAPPHIREDOG MORE THAN ME!!!!!!!!!! *fetal position in a corner* ...am i a bad person...? :(
...ASOTA (the invisible one)
Frizz: OMG I am SOOO sorry Asota. I didn't mean to skip you. I fixed it as soon as I saw it. *Pulls out an amazingly cute Chibi-Yazoo and pushes him toward Asota* Here, cuddle with him, he should make you feel better.
Savaial
This is an awesome read. Deep, even profound character development. A tight plot. Sexual tension. Yet you've crafted beauty and hope in this, and caring. Everyone keeps evolving. Wonderful work.
Frizz: I loved your stories too! I am glad that you took the time to read mine. Hopefully I will see you on here again! The evolutions are still in progress and there are quite a few twists coming up!
blubb
hey there. I really like your story, it never gets boring or disgressing. the charaters are very well developed and as far as I can tell, they are very much in character. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Frizz: I am glad that you think I have kept them in character. I know they are slowly changing into OOC but I hope that their evolution through my storyline makes it believable!
'CHAOS SPEAKING'
~ (Time and/or story focus shift)
Chapter 27
Somewhere deep inside, he knew that he should be at least a little worried. There should be fear of the claws, metal or real, that ran so smoothly over his heated flesh, leaving a path of stinging cuts. He should be afraid of the white fangs following the thin trails of blood left behind by the claws. Though he knew he should feel these things, in all honesty, Yazoo didn't give a shit about what he should or shouldn't be feeling. Those devilishly pointed fingers sent electrifying shocks through his body, causing him to writhe and beg for more. That fiery mouth devoured his dwindling self-control, leaving him little more than a quivering mass of lust.
Sin fought to restrain himself with each sweet cry that left the silver-haired man. Never had he desired to bring pleasure to another so strongly. He knew how to allow others to take their pleasure in him and how to give them their completion quickly, but strangely he wanted to draw this out. Each wave of lust that emanated from the slender Remnant sent a fiery burn to his awakening erection. It took every bit of control he had to not ravage and perhaps harm the beautiful figure beneath him. The sweet flavor of Yazoo's skin mixed with the richness of his blood was like the strongest aphrodisiac to the collared man.
As he brought himself lower down the slender torso, Sin became aware of a small problem. In order to continue his explorations of the silver-haired man, he would have to unwrap his tail from the pale wrists it held together. As the slave paused in his ministrations, Yazoo cracked open a single blue-green eye and sent a pleading look to the dark haired man. "Sin, I...I promise I won't move my hands. Just please...don't stop," He panted.
Sin nodded silently at the desperate plea, curious to see how long the Remnant would be able to hold to his promise. Slowly, he unraveled the purple appendage, allowing the soft fur to tickle the sensitive skin. Slender fingers twitched, urging to hold onto something, but Yazoo held himself. Deciding to test his 'captive's' resolve, Sin leaned down once more, biting harshly on a hardened nipple. A loud cry escaped the silver-haired man and he arched up but still managed to keep his wrists crossed.
Nonetheless, sharp teeth maintained their delicious torture of the sensitive nub. A golden claw trailed upward and mimicked the same treatment on the other, much to the delight and dismay of the young Remnant. The twin sensations felt wonderful, but his erection was becoming uncomfortably hard. He desired release badly but didn't want too lose this nearly overwhelming pleasure. All too soon, a familiar tightening coiled itself in his belly and he felt as though his body would shatter if the building pressure wasn't released soon. Sin understood the desperation in the younger man's movements and decided to provide him with a rather...unique experience. His now unoccupied tail slowly crept between their bodies.
Yazoo nearly exploded as the soft warmth to the furry tail wrapped itself firmly around his aching arousal. He knew he wouldn't last long as the furred appendage spiraled his length, expertly twisting and stroking him to the brink. With a loud cry, his vision turned white as his body shook from the waves of pleasure. Somehow though, he still managed to keep his hands above him.
Admittedly impressed with the younger man's control, Sin waited until the Remnant stilled before pulling away and unwinding his tail from the softening flesh. He looked at the creamy white fluid clinging to the purple fur curiously. He knew he would need to clean it but did not wish to go through the tedious process of cleaning and drying the fur in the river again. Nodding to no one in particular, he quickly sat on the edge of the large boulder and began removing the cooling cum from his tail.
After he slowly drifted down from the afterglow, Yazoo opened his eyes and sat up, quickly seeking out the collared slave. The sight that greeted him caused him to pause for a moment before letting out a small laugh. Sin held his own tail and was cleaning it with his tongue! When the Remnant's laugh reached him, he paused and tilted his head in curiosity. Yazoo couldn't help himself, with the tail cleaning and that curious gaze, it wasn't hard to imagine this collared creature as a house cat and he laughed even harder.
Sin did not understand what the pale-haired man found so amusing but he enjoyed the heartfelt sounds. Instinctively, he understood that it was a rarity with the young Remnant and he was pleased that somehow he had caused it. His first priority was always to please his Master, and though he did not belong to this long-haired one, he was still to treat him with the same respect. He turned his attention back to his tail for a moment but, satisfied that it was clean, he let it go and faced the slender man. The amusement in those vibrant, blue-green eyes had faded to something far more intense, a deep searing hunger that seemed undiminished by his recent orgasm.
The dark look reminded the slave forcefully of his own ignored desire but he mentally shoved it aside. His orders were to sate the silver-haired man's needs, not his own. A low chuckle resonated in his mind. 'FOOLISH SERVANT. DO YOU NOT SEE IT IN HIS EYES? IN ORDER TO SATISFY THE LITTLE SHINGA-CHI, YOUR OWN DESIRES WILL BE TENDED TO SEVERAL TIMES BEFORE THIS NIGHT IS THROUGH.' As the demon continued to howl it's laughter, Sin noticed blue-green eyes looking at him expectantly, standing at the far end of the boulder.
"Are you coming?" Yazoo asked, a subtle, teasing emphasis on the last word. Without waiting for an answer, the slender man turned away and lept for the nearby shore. Sin quickly made to follow, gathering his powerful legs beneath him before hurtling into the air. A sudden impulse struck him and he immediately decided to go with it. After all, he was only following his orders.
Yazoo had nearly landed safely on the dry bank when a clawed hand grabbed his arm and he was thrown back into the air. A shocked cry escaped him before Sin caught him, wings beating steadily. "Sin! What are you doing?!"
"You told us to surprise you."
"Well you did! You can put me down now," Yazoo squirmed a little in the collared man's arms. He felt mildly embarrassed at being cradled like a child and even more so in the fact that a large part of him just wanted to snuggle closer into the embrace.
"Are you so sure you wish us to let go?"
The silver-haired man almost immediately said yes but he paused and took the time to look down. His already pale skin turned two shades whiter when he realized that the thin glimmering line below them was the river they had bathed in moments earlier. Normally heights did little to daunt him, after all, he was bred and trained to withstand a lot more than any ordinary person. However, they were now well beyond what Yazoo believed to be his body's limit and knew that if he was dropped, he wouldn't be walking away from the landing. "Um...maybe not."
Sin felt a small amount of amusement at the slight waver in the young man's voice. He shifted his grip, allowing the Remnant to slide to a more vertical position. The pale hands immediately clamped down on the metal arm around his chest as the furry tail wrapped around his waist in extra support. Sin leaned his head forward and spoke softly into Yazoo's ear, "Afraid that we will drop you?"
"No, I have just never been this high up before without being in an airship. I trust you."
What was it about those three words that made him want more than what he deserved, to have this beautiful, willful, trusting creature as the one he called Master? Why couldn't he simply empty his thoughts and feelings on anything but Master's will like he had before. The winged man did not like being confused or unsure when it came to himself, it was a sure sign of weakness.
Yazoo allowed himself to become lost in the amazing view. If he looked to the south, he could just barely make out the small glow from the lights in Edge. The waxing moon and starlight bathed the large forest beneath them in a soft glow and, for a moment, he thought he could see a glimmer from their camp where Loz slept. He turned his gaze back to the alluring, dark-haired man that held him and gifted him with a rare smile.
Sin lost all thoughts as that single expression transformed the Remnant's face from beautiful to something indescribably breathtaking. He would deal with his own problems later. First, he had orders that needed to be completed.
Yazoo's world was literally turned upside down as Sin's wings stopped moving and they began to plummet head first. Before long, his sight was blocked by a layer of red as the leathery wings were wrapped in a cocoon around the two men. Though his stomach seemed to have shifted to his feet and his heart raced madly, the Remnant found himself laughing at the sheer excitement. The laugh faded into a moan as sharp teeth nibbled at the nape of his neck. The red shield burst open with a rush of wind and the two men were flipped upright and pulled to a stop with only a few feet between them and the ground.
Yazoo felt a momentary appreciation for Sin's control of the situation but let it go as he became reminded of a large erection pressing against his backside. 'It's a good thing I brought supplies. He is a little bigger than Loz and it would hurt if I wasn't prepared.' He scanned their surroundings and was pleasantly surprised to find that they were very close to the spot they had left their clothes, "I say we move this to a more solid surface, hm?"
He was given no verbal answer but soon found his feet touching cool grass. He pulled out of Sin's tight embrace and walked over to the bundle of black clothing, quickly removing a small clear container from one of his pockets. Yazoo was glad that he had thought to grab the skin oil from Vincent's things. More than likely the gunman used the clear fluid on the area where his arm and the metal claw connected, but the Remnant had a very different idea in mind.
Sin followed after Yazoo and was surprised when the man suddenly turned and pounced on him. Training instinct told him to submit and so he allowed himself to be pushed back onto the ground without a fight. He knew that he was going to be rewarded for his actions when the Remnant took his aching arousal in hand. He had to bite back a moan at the delicious caresses and nearly lost it anyway when he was suddenly encased in warm wetness.
Daring to look down, the collared man was shocked to find Yazoo sucking and bobbing as though the hard cock was a favored treat. As a low moan left the Remnant, Sin also became aware that the silver-haired man was fingering himself, thrusting two of the slender digits in time with his mouth. As scarlet and black eyes watched the impossibly erotic scene, a third finger was inserted and a loud moan vibrated through his erection and into his blood. Sin fought to get control of himself quickly.
Yazoo opened his eyes and immediately slowed his eyes as he became aware of the desperation in the collared man's eyes. 'No use ending this before it gets good.' He pulled away for a moment and slowly removed his fingers from himself, allowing the tension to ease slightly. As Sin's breathing calmed, Yazoo crawled up and straddled the slave as he sensually rocked his hips, causing them both to groan at the friction. Deciding that he had had enough with teasing, he shifted upward and rocked back, feeling the hard crown press against his entrance. He leaned in close to the flushed face beneath him, his silver hair falling loosely around them, and hissed passionately, "Fuck me till it hurts."
Something seemed to snap in the slave and Yazoo felt clawed hands grab tightly onto his hips as he was pulled down sharply. He let out a loud scream as waves of pain and pleasure twisted maddening inside him. The thrusts came hard and fast and it was all the Remnant could do to simply hold himself up. Placing his hands on the firm chest below him, he dug his nails in as his prostate was hit, his vision flashing white, "Oh fuck yes! Just...just like that!"
The collared man seemed to understand as the sensitive gland was unerringly hit again and again. Yazoo could feel himself reaching the edge and cried out as he was suddenly flipped onto his back. The hard thrusts picked up in speed and the Remnant's body soon stiffened immensely as his orgasm rocked through him. As his body relaxed, Sin's motions slowed to a stop and Yazoo found himself able to return to higher thought processes. 'Damn, he didn't even have to touch me.' He shifted slightly on the uneven ground and came to a shocking realization. Sin was still hard! He glanced down to find a ring of purple surrounded the winged man's erection. Blue-green eyes glared into scarlet and black, "You used your tail as a cock ring? Why?"
"We must follow Master's orders. You can still walk."
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A/N: Finally! The long awaited lemon! Woot! Hope it wasn't too rushed for you guys
SapphireDog
*whimper* but...but..so close dammit...so damn close! your almost there! gah! ALMOST THERE!!!!!! *whimper*
Frizz: I know, I'm evil. But you love me anyway right?
Kuragari
XD so very true darling. don't worry about it, I like this chapter anyway. hmmm... oddly enough I'm beginning to REALLY like Chaos. XD. keep 'em coming! see you soon ;)
Frizz: So why are you only now beginning to like Chaos? Curious minds must know!
Ainaloth
Oh I really do like where this is going! ^.^
Frizz: I hope you also like where it ended up
Anonymous Sister of the Author
...you...you *sniffles* ...you don't LIKE ME ANYMORE!!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! i feel soooooooo unloved!!!!! you didn't even WANT to reply to my last review!!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!! YOU LIKE SAPPHIREDOG MORE THAN ME!!!!!!!!!! *fetal position in a corner* ...am i a bad person...? :(
...ASOTA (the invisible one)
Frizz: OMG I am SOOO sorry Asota. I didn't mean to skip you. I fixed it as soon as I saw it. *Pulls out an amazingly cute Chibi-Yazoo and pushes him toward Asota* Here, cuddle with him, he should make you feel better.
Savaial
This is an awesome read. Deep, even profound character development. A tight plot. Sexual tension. Yet you've crafted beauty and hope in this, and caring. Everyone keeps evolving. Wonderful work.
Frizz: I loved your stories too! I am glad that you took the time to read mine. Hopefully I will see you on here again! The evolutions are still in progress and there are quite a few twists coming up!
blubb
hey there. I really like your story, it never gets boring or disgressing. the charaters are very well developed and as far as I can tell, they are very much in character. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Frizz: I am glad that you think I have kept them in character. I know they are slowly changing into OOC but I hope that their evolution through my storyline makes it believable!