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Crimson moon
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Final Fantasy VII › Het - Male/Female
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Adult +
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3
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1,214
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4
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Category:
Final Fantasy VII › Het - Male/Female
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
3
Views:
1,214
Reviews:
4
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own Final Fantasy VII, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
A little background info
Apparently there is some here who think I don’t know anything about writing thou I only have this to say, most of the errors that appear seemingly come from the transfer you see I do use word to spell-check and I spend hours grammar checking the fic thou I still miss some points there is a certain someone who has agreed to help with what I do miss… everyone makes mistakes most of mine appear in my writing keep in mind this isn’t revised yet my the reader I still haven’t gotten a response from the chosen reader however I believe this has something to do with current e-mail problems possibly on her end thou it appears to be on mine.
As for the old English if you have ever read a vampire novel the old English is used to make it more… how do I put this as to not offend a reviewer… MORBID if you have taken a creative writing class you would know this. "Interview With the Vampire" is used a reference in the class I took, as a matter of fact we had to do a book report on it detailing what aspects were used to help create a mood in the book. I noticed that throughout the entire book that cretin forms of old English were used as mood settings hence why I used it as a CHAPTER TITLE to make the fic look more cryptic in nature.
“Sentence structure seems a bit poor” I urge you to keep in mind that this hasn’t been revamped YET, and I am quite busy on my end, you should try looking at your own mistakes rather than someone else’s.
Ah yes the onions Trust me they will come into play later on in the story why else would I bring it up. ^ , ~
I didn’t have time to describe her in the since I would like I am still working on it trying to make it sound like I want it. And its called google image search. And you should see it before it has been through spell-check, maybe than you will see how much work I put into my writing.
--this is a reminder that if you pay attion ot all the detail in the fic you miss the big picture and this is but a sample of my un edited writing.
As for the old English if you have ever read a vampire novel the old English is used to make it more… how do I put this as to not offend a reviewer… MORBID if you have taken a creative writing class you would know this. "Interview With the Vampire" is used a reference in the class I took, as a matter of fact we had to do a book report on it detailing what aspects were used to help create a mood in the book. I noticed that throughout the entire book that cretin forms of old English were used as mood settings hence why I used it as a CHAPTER TITLE to make the fic look more cryptic in nature.
“Sentence structure seems a bit poor” I urge you to keep in mind that this hasn’t been revamped YET, and I am quite busy on my end, you should try looking at your own mistakes rather than someone else’s.
Ah yes the onions Trust me they will come into play later on in the story why else would I bring it up. ^ , ~
I didn’t have time to describe her in the since I would like I am still working on it trying to make it sound like I want it. And its called google image search. And you should see it before it has been through spell-check, maybe than you will see how much work I put into my writing.
--this is a reminder that if you pay attion ot all the detail in the fic you miss the big picture and this is but a sample of my un edited writing.