Suddenly Late One Night

Suddenly Late One Night

A Final Fantasy VIII Fan Fic

By Bubblegom

Chapter Four

FF VIII characters and locations are owned by SquareSoft.

NC-17 for sexual content. Enter at your own risk.

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Two hours later, I was getting out of a Balamb ‘Yellow Cab’ in front of the Garden clad in my new blue jeans and T-shirt. My feet were adorned in tennis shoes and across my T-shirt was written in fancy script, ‘Welcome to Balamb.’ Man, I wish I could have kept that as a souvenir. How cool would that have been?

As soon as I approached the front gates, I realized that Xu must have provided the SeeDs, who were serving as guards, a detailed description of me and told them to keep an eye out for me.

“You’re to come with me. Commander Xu wishes to speak with you immediately,” a tall, thick-set Seed said brusquely.

The serious expression on his face warned me away from protesting and so I simply said, “Okay.”

He turned to his partner and said, “I’m taking him to the Commander’s office. I’ll be back directly.”

The Seed, who I didn’t recognize by the way, then took me by the bicep and frog marched me through the Garden. After I gained admittance to her office and the guard had left, Xu gazed at me sternly from across her desk.

“Hi,” I said weakly.

“Cut the crap,” she snarled. Xu picked up her cell phone from her desk and punched in three digits. “He’s back,” she spoke laconically into the phone. “Meet us in the Disciplinary Room in fifteen minutes.”

The Disciplinary Room! I didn’t like the sound of that one bit. Xu stood up and thrust the phone into a skirt pocket. “Come with me,” she ordered.

As she led me through the Garden and then down to the basement, where the Disciplinary Rooms were located, I was considering whether I should just cut and run; but if I did, where would I go? I’ll admit it, I was frightened.

I was even more so when I got a look at the Disciplinary Room. One wall consisted of nothing but shatterproof glass through which a constant surveillance could be maintained on the prisoner. There was nowhere to sit except for a toilet and only the white tile floor offered a place to lay down.

As soon as Xu and I entered the room, Quistis stepped forward. She was even more gorgeous in the flesh than she appeared in the game.

“Why didn’t you stay in Zell’s room as I asked you to, but instead you leave the Garden without permission?” Xu asked angrily, her face flushed.

“Well, Selphie and Irvine asked -.”

“I’ve already spoken to Selphie and Irvine,” the female Commander interrupted. “They didn’t realize you were supposed to remain here. Don’t try to blame it on them.”

“I’m not, I’m -.”

“And where is your uniform?” Xu demanded in a much louder voice. “Those things cost money, you know.”

I was growing more scared with each passing second. Xu appeared to be working herself up into a murderous rage. “I sorta lost it,” I murmured.

“You what?!” Xu now screamed. “How in Hyne’s name could you lose your uniform?”

“I…I was playing the Card Queen and -.”

“Enough!” Xu cried out. “I don’t want to hear about how the Card Queen now owns one of our uniforms. You have three choices, mister,” Xu continued in a quieter, but much more deadly tone, “You can leave here and never return. You can choose to remain locked in the Disciplinary Room for a period of one week or accept physical punishment and you will be released tomorrow morning. Which will it be?”

As Xu waited expectantly, my mind was whirling. What a choice! I would be insane to leave the Garden. It was all I knew of their world. If I left, I would certainly be condemning myself to an early death. On the other hand, a week by myself in the sterile, uncomfortable environment of the Disciplinary Room would drive me crazy.

“I’ll take the punishment,” I blurted out. After all, I figured, how bad can it be? As it turned out, it could be horribly bad.

“Very well,” Xu said solemnly. “Strip off your clothing.”

Although I was initially surprised and taken aback to receive such a command, I didn’t hesitate to begin to divest myself of my apparel. Unfortunately my prick didn’t appear to appreciate the precariously dangerous situation I was in, because by the time I had stripped myself completely, it had become rock hard.

As I complied with Xu’s next command of standing with my hands behind my head and my legs spread wide, she paid absolutely no attention to my erection that was sticking out in front of me, although I caught a quick glimpse of Quistis hiding a quick grin behind her hand.

“Quistis, your turn,” Xu spoke.

I watched with horror as Quistis stepped forward, unfastening ‘Save the Queen’ from where she carried it on her hip.

‘Oh shit!’ I thought.

“You may break the skin, but nothing life damaging,” the dark-haired woman explained.

“No problem,” Quistis responded with an evil grin as she stepped around me.

‘Thank God,’ I thought as I realized the strawberry-blonde woman was going to lash my back. Once I had gotten a good look at the awesome potential power of her weapon, there wasn’t a doubt in my mind that she could have lopped off my prick in its current condition with one slash.

CRAACK! Oh Goddamn! I thought I was prepared for it to hurt, but nothing can describe the hellish agonizing pain that accompanied Quistis’ initial lash. I quickly forgot my vow to accept my punishment stoically as I was driven to my knees screaming.

“One,” Xu unemotionally intoned.

Lash after lash was inflicted across my back and shoulders from Quistis’ whip as I screamed, cried and begged for forgiveness. After what seemed an eternity, it was over.

“Ok, that’s ten, good job, Quistis,” Xu praised.

“Thanks,” she answered with some pride in her tone.

“I’ll be back in the morning. Have a pleasant night,” Xu sarcastically said.

The two women then exited leaving me a weeping bloody mess lying on the tile floor.

……….

The pain began to recede enough after an hour or two had passed that I was able to check out my immediate environment. My back still felt on fire, but at least I was able to move around minimally. Upon lifting my head to look around, I immediately noticed that my clothes were nowhere to be seen. Xu must have taken them with her.

I suddenly felt as though someone was staring at me and I turned my head to glance through the huge window. To my great consternation, there was a female Seed gazing at me solemnly. Even though I realized she must have been one of the guards assigned to watch over me, and I was also certain that Xu would have instructed her to keep a close eye on me due to possible medical complications from my whipping, I was still feeling very vulnerable laying there bloody and naked.

She was quite lovely with long red hair, and looked from my vantage point to stand about five foot, six inches and to possess a beautiful fulsome figure. In other words given a different situation, I wouldn’t have minded being the center of her attention.

She soon quit her position at the window and left and I was greatly relieved to no longer be observed in such a humiliating position. My relief turned out to be short lived as she was quickly replaced by another female Seed. Unlike the serious mien of the first guard, this young woman was smiling widely at me with obvious lust in her eyes. In fact, she was positively leering at me.

I discovered later that her name was Hillary and was considered quite a freak around the Garden. She was not attractive at all. Hillary possessed a rather chunky figure, if not down right fat. She was wearing far too much makeup and her reddish-brown hair hung limply. She must have altered her official uniform to a ludicrous degree as it was far too tight for her substantial frame and the skirt had been inappropriately shortened to just below the apex of her underwear. No wonder she was so intrigued with me, she probably hadn’t seen much male nudity, if any. Hillary actually had the audacity to mouth a greeting to me and wave as if she were across the room at a crowded party.

It was then that I decided to give her a private show. If she was enjoying looking at me, I’d really give her something to stare at. Despite the terrible pain involved, I managed to pull myself to a sitting position facing her.

Her face immediately became flushed, I suppose from sexual excitement. It certainly wasn’t the heavy blush of embarrassment. I slowly and torturously pulled myself to my feet and crossed the room to the window.

My penis had remained flaccid because she didn’t stimulate me in any fashion. I pantomimed that I wanted to masturbate to her, but because of my injuries I needed some motivation and was she willing to provide it. Despite her appearing not very intelligent, Hillary grasped my meaning and she immediately dropped her skirt to the floor and stepped out of it.


She was wearing a filthy looking white thong and her pubic hair was poking out in all directions from beneath it. Hillary had just hooked her thumbs in the waistband of her thong and was beginning to pull it down when Quistis suddenly appeared behind her.

And I must say she looked absolutely scrumptious. She had eschewed the wearing of her traditional outfit, which she had on earlier when she punished me and instead was attired in a cutoff T-shit and some skimpy blue shorts. Even though I couldn’t hear her through the soundproof glass, I could tell from her angry expression that Quistis was shouting out some strong invective at Hillary over discovering her in such an compromising and unprofessional position.

The look of total surprise and shock on Hillary’s face was priceless. Before she could react further, Quistis grabbed her by the shoulder and spun her around and delivered a stinging slap across her face. The senior SeeD then must have called out to the other guard, because she appeared on the scene almost immediately. The lovely redhead obviously received a directive from Quistis as she then led the by now weeping Hillary away, probably to be placed in another Disciplinary Room. The strawberry-blonde haired woman then entered the room I was held in.

“You are sooo bad,” she accused in a playful tone. “Most men would have been in the clinic for a week from the beating I handed out to you, but instead I find you standing and enticing your guard to inappropriately act out.

“Sorry,” I said softly. “But I couldn’t help myself, she’s such an idiot.”

“Haha, I know that’s right. I don’t know why Cid ever allowed her to become a SeeD. I think he feels sorry for her, but I really shouldn’t be gossiping with you about other SeeDs. Go lay down on your stomach,” said Quistis in a more serious voice.

After I had complied with her directive, Quistis knelt beside me and opened a draw string small plaid cloth bag she had brought with her. She withdrew a small white jar of salve and opened it.

“This will relieve your pain,” she explained.

I watched as Quistis dipped her fingertips into the white salve and she began to lightly trace one of the slash wounds. I wondered why she was being so sparingly with it until a few seconds later the pain miraculously disappeared every where she had already touched. No wonder she’s not wasting any, I thought. This stuff must be very expensive in their world. Hell, it would be priceless in ours.

I could tell from the touch of Quistis that none of my slash wounds painfully criss-crossed each other. I realized that this would have taken great skill on the part of the whip wielding SeeD and she had gone out of her way to save me extra pain. After Quistis had completed her task, all of the pain had vanished.

“How do you feel?” she asked solicitously.

“Great, thanks a lot.”

I began to arise from my prone position and the former instructor ordered, “Stay still. Just because the pain is gone doesn’t mean your wounds are healed. I need to use some cures on you.”

I rested on my elbows and turned my head in order to watch her cast the magic.

“Please lie flat,” she requested.

Damn it! I had really wanted to watch her doing it. In my mind, when I played the game, I always had imagined that some noise would accompany the casting of magic, but I heard nothing out of the ordinary. There was only a slight tingling on my back.”

“Ok, you’re as good as Gil,” she said happily. “You can sit up now.”

As I pulled myself to a sitting position facing the kneeling Quistis, it seemed as if it occurred to both of us simultaneously that the situation had just drastically changed. I had gone from being an object of pity who badly needed medical care to a naked young man, who she barely knew. A rosy hue had arisen on Quistis’ cheeks.

“Well, I guess I’d better shove off now and let you get some rest,” the now obviously discomfited young woman said.

Operating only on an uncontrollable instinct, I reached out and grasped Quistis’ wrist lightly. “Please stay,” I implored. “I’ve had a terrible day and I could really use some company.”

There was just no way that I was going to allow Quistis to drift out of my life; at least, not without making an attempt to persuade her otherwise. I quickly dropped her wrist and long seconds passed. Suddenly she emphatically stood and said, “Ok, I’ll just inform the guard to go on break.”

The beautiful woman returned directly and said, flashing me a grin, “I told her I would come get her in the break room when we’re finished talking.”

Kneeling again in front of me where I was now sitting with my hands covering my groin coyly, Quistis asked, “What did you want to talk about?”

“This,” I answered and pulled her close to me. I leaned down slightly and kissed her luscious lips.

I was amazed I remembered to take a breath. I thought I had died and gone to heaven. I was tasting the lips of the most beautiful woman I had ever seen and she was kissing me voraciously in return.

Quistis literally exploded into passion, taking my head in her hands and kissing me all over my face and then my neck and then down to my belly. My erection had grown rock hard as she kissed all around my pubes. I interrupted Quistis for a second as I pulled her cutoff T-shirt off her and was entranced to observe she wasn’t attired in a bra.

Her breasts were perfect with large nipples. They looked to my untrained eye to be around 34D. I lowered my head and alternated suckling her nipples until they grew hard in my mouth. Moaning softly, Quistis lowered her mouth on my stiff prick.

“Wait,” I said. “I want to make love to you in the worst way – or barring that, at least halfway decent.”

Quistis laughed and said, “That certainly is the most inept proposition I have ever received. I guess I’m gonna to have to say yes.”

With my heart in my throat and my mouth completely dry, I watched as Quistis gracefully stood. She unsnapped her shorts and peeled them down, along with her underwear, past her hips and then down to the floor. The female SeeD stepped out of them, casting them aside and stood in front of me in her glorious natural state holding her arms out in invitation.

God, she has to be the most beautiful woman ever – in any world. Her skin was literally glowing golden and her pubic hair was strawberry-blonde, totally dispelling the rumor began by Rinoa and repeated by Selphie to me that Quistis was a bottle blonde.

Quistis knelt by her cloth bag and pulled out a wrapped condom and handed it to me. I noticed that it was ‘Shumi Village’ brand, ‘Hyperion’ style. You know those Shumi – they just have their big hands in everything. I wasn’t at all surprised that Quistis was the one woman here who was intelligent enough to practice birth control.

“You ready?” she asked, smiling.

“Uh huh.” I nodded.

I was so nervous I could hardly speak. I so wanted to please her. Quistis lowered herself to the floor and lay in front of me wordlessly. I crouched over her and kissed her again and again, slipping my tongue into her mouth, which she reciprocated in kind.

Removing her mouth from mine, the young woman said simply, “It’s time.”

I fumbled with opening the condom package and Quistis took pity on me and said, “Here, let me do it. She took it from my hand and after opening it, Quistis rolled it lovingly up my rock hard prick. Thus suitably dressed for the occasion, I then took things into my own hands and inserted my erection into Quistis’ sweetly tight pussy.

I thrusted in and out, exalting in the exquisite sensations I felt as well as in the fact that I was making love to the woman I most desired, one that I didn’t even know really existed a little more than two days previous.

Quistis arched her back, thrusting her pelvis upward at me causing me to penetrate her ever deeper. Her eyes were hooded and she wore a rapturous smile. I felt my orgasm building with a sense of disquietude, almost bordering on panic, because I wanted to satisfy her so badly. I closed my eyes to eliminate visual stimulation to thwart my quickly developing orgasm from arriving too quickly and to distract myself I thought of useless mundane things, such as U.S. politics and organized religion.

Despite all my efforts to divert myself, the pleasure I was experiencing was just too great and I was right on the verge of cumming when I heard the beautiful young woman gasping below me. She was thrashing wildly and realizing she was close, I held on for the ride, thrusting in and out all the while.

I opened my eyes and found Quistis starring up at me, her eyes wide open and a glorious smile upon her sweet lips. “Oh Hyne,” she moaned loudly, pulling me tightly to her as she climaxed. I shot off my orgasm, in several intense squirts. God, I had never felt as good as I did at that moment.

Despite feeling totally satiated, I didn’t want the experience to end and I kissed Quistis again and again. Finally my erection wilted completely and slipped out of her and I rolled over on my back, still rushing from the intense love making. Quistis flung her arm carelessly across my stomach and turned her head, smiling at me.

“That was great,” she said.

“Yeah,” I agreed. I was feeling so mellow I couldn’t think of one more thing to say - like a big dummy. After a few minutes had passed with both of us lying in a pleasant haze, Quistis sat up, her beautiful breasts jutting out in front of her.

“Well, I’d better go get your guard. We’ve had a pretty long conversation,” she said.

Quistis leaned over and offered me a long lingering passionate kiss making my boner half hard again. The young woman stood and quickly pulled on her attire.

“Will…will be we able to talk again?” I asked timidly.

Quistis smiled down at me, fully realizing what I was really asking. “Oh, I’ll be around. We can probably have a chat from time to time. Here, let me help you with that. We don’t want to scandalize your guard,” she said, leaning over and carefully removing my used condom.

She crossed the room, delicately carrying it pinched between two fingers, and deposited it in the toilet, flushing away the evidence of our lovemaking. Quistis recrossed to the door and then paused.

“Get some rest, sweetie. I’ll see you around,” she said.

And then she was gone. I closed my eyes and relived the whole wonderful experience in my mind. Just before I drifted off to sleep, I realized that I had fallen in love.

Early the next morning, I was awakened, none too gently, by the tall, thickset male guard who had lead me to Xu’s office on the previous day.

“Get up,” he ordered abruptly and he thrusted a uniform into my arms. “And report immediately to Commander Xu’s office.

He turned and left the room. I quickly stood and dressed. I was ready for a new day.