Taming the Fates Amidst Chaos
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Chapter 52
'Internal thought'
'CHAOS SPEAKING'
~ (Time and/or story focus shift)
Chapter 52
Laughter filled the small cavern, it's sound mocking and cruel. Cloud's eyes slowly opened, first landing on the sight of teeth and eyes clenched in pain and anger. 'Sephiroth survived that?! No, Vincent must have done something.'
As the gunman's laughter died down, the raven-haired man stood and leaned over Sephiroth, making sure he had the man's full attention, "Did you really think we would let you off that easy, General?" He gave the embedded gun a light tap, the miniscule movement causing the silver-haired man to flinch, "Its interesting how blanks still make it feel like there is fire burning your insides, isn't it? Chaos wanted to do that himself but when I woke up, he decided to let me have the pleasure."
He twisted Death Penalty again with a little push and smirked at the hiss that followed before walking forwards. Vincent stared down at the General, mako eyes glaring up into his, swirling with anger but otherwise the silver haired man was quiet, "I'll bet you thought that when I walked in here, I would bemoan your path in life and grant you mercy because you are Lucrecia's son."
Reaching down with his clawed left hand, Vincent roughly pulled Sephiroth’s head up more, "Well I've got news for you. Lucrecia's son died years ago in Nibelheim. All that I see now is the pathetic remains of a failed experiment."
Scarlet eyes turned from the hissing General, focusing instead on Cloud, "Strife? Since you have decided to grace us with your presence, would you be willing to assist me in a little project?"
Cloud blinked in confusion before the words registered. A large part of him wanted to say no, but something about the cold, calculating gaze told him that such an answer would be incorrect. "Um...sure?"
“Good answer, now come over here.”
Vincent wanted to laugh at the blond male, whom nervously dragged his body from the wall and floor, taking timid steps towards him and the General. Chaos’ voice took over his own, a fanged grin spreading Vincent’s face, “Truly amusing, human. What is it you fear?”
Cloud shuddered, still not used to the constant switching between demon and host, crossed his arms as he glanced at his one time hero, “I don’t…uh…fear anything. I just don’t know why you want me to help you with..this.”
"Because I can smell the fear and nervousness rolling off of you at the moment and if you are going to remain here, then I would rather have you doing something instead of just making some of the others in our head antsy." Vincent bent over and picked up the homemade ‘leash’, making sure to tighten the collar a little before holding it out to the blond. Cloud’s brows lifted before reaching out and taking the offering a bit awkwardly, ”Simply tug and it will halt any protest or snarky comment the half-breed makes. We shall take care of the rest, that is, unless at one point you to wish to help by other means than holding the rope.”
”The leash is fine…”
Vincent shrugged, “Very well then.”
"Can't deal with me alone, coward? Guess not only are you an abomination but-" He was cut off by a forceful pull but the damage was already done.
Scarlet eyes flashed with fury, "Coward? You dare call ME a coward you miserable wretch?!"
Scarlet orbs flashed black as a wave of power flowed through Vincent’s chest to his right hand, the gunman ignoring the twinge of pain. Before he knew it, his fist went flying down onto Sephiroth’s dislocated shoulder, a sickening crunch and scream coming from the man’s body.
Pulling his hand back, Vincent moved to grab at the leash and yank, only to find that his hand was now covered in purple fur, fingertips now graced with black claws. He looked down at his arm with wonder and amusement, ”Hmm, it appears absorbing Sin makes the transformations controllable and nearly painless. I did not even notice.”
Fur slid back into pale skin as the claws receded as well, "Well this changes things a little. I wonder..."
He focused on his right hand for a moment, watching as the skin began to change into the sickly green of Death Gigas, electricity dancing between his fingertips. A sadistic grin grew on his face as he placed a finger over one of the many open wounds on the silver-haired man's body. Cloud immediatly jumped back, releasing the braided hair as he was also shocked by the current now running through the bound man. Vincent pulled the finger back, willing his arm to return to normal, "My apologies Cloud. We did not think it would jump to you as well. I will warn you should I decide to do that again."
Chaos once again broke through Vincent’s voice, chuckling darkly as Cloud picked the leash back up. 'THIS COULD BE INTERESTING, HOST.'
Vincent grinned, “Yes. Hmm, I wonder...”
His wrist flicked and the skin started to turn black, torn and shredded gloves covering his hand. Fingers closed over a fazing object, a handle materializing in his grasp before the engine and chains of Hellmasker’s chainsaw appeared. Vincent chuckled, a dark shadow covering his face as he turned his eyes toward fearful Mako blue, “Well well, isn’t this handy.”
”Oh Holy…”
The gunner smirked, left claw grasping the string of the engine and giving a yank. The whirl of a blade filled the cavern, the steady grinding of gears a menacing sound. Vincent lifted the revolving blade to eye level, touching a claw from his left hand to the spinning flat side. The nail was taken down almost immediately from the friction. “I think it is high time someone threw you over their knee, Sephiroth, for being a bad little child. What do you think, Cloud?”
The blond muttered under his breath, hands fidgeting with the leash, “A few years too late really…”
Vincent laughed before reaching down to grasp Death Penalty. Without warning, he ripped the gun from the General’s ass causing Sephiroth to scream once again, a curse flying from his lips. The gunner examined the barrels of his weapon, grimacing at the coat of tainted blood and skin tissue. “My, you seem to have gotten my favorite gun filthy. I should make you clean it though maybe after.”
Setting the gun down, Vincent placed his foot onto Sephiroth’s back and leaned forwards on it with his left arm, dangerous blade hovering over pale cheeks. Blood dripped to the ground from the torn entrance, ragged pants leaving the General’s chest.
Cloud glanced at the hovering blade, “Vincent? Are you actually going to…”
The dark haired male smiled, almost innocently, “To spank him? Why yes, I am. I have a feeling that our dear little Sephy was never spanked. I do believe it’s about time we showed him what happens to naughty children.”
Sephiroth jerked his head, almost making Cloud lose his loose grip on the leash, “I refuse suffer this humiliation and remain sile-erk!"
The blond swordsman fought to keep from smirking as he cut off the silver-haired man's air. Vincent noticed however and grinned, "You've been wanting to do that a while, haven't you?”
"Years."
Vincent’s grin widened but he didn’t reply. Instead, he dug his heel into Sephiroth’s spine and lowered the spinning flat side of the blade to soft flesh. The friction split into the soft tissue, tearing a layer from the top of the General’s buttock. The silver haired man hissed out a ‘Fuck!’ while trying to flinch away from the contact.
A dark brow lifted, ”What a potty mouth you have Sephiroth.”
Cloud choked back a snicker at the gunman's mockingly parental tone. Pulling the chainsaw back, Vincent released the pressure on Sephiroth’s back and stood by the his bleeding backside, ”For being so rude, I am going to make you count. And for every hit you don’t count, 1 more will be added to how many you get. Let’s start with 15, shall we?”
Sephiroth growled, earning a tug from the leash and silencing the rumble. Jade eyes turned to glare at Cloud, who made show of waving the leash around a little, blue eyes dancing. There was no warning before the rotating object was brought down onto his ass, successfully tearing more skin apart. The General grunted but remained silent, ”Count!”
Again the object came down, but Sephiroth still refused to speak.
Vincent frowned, eyes flashing gold before Chaos’ voice filled the room with an angry growl, “You insufferable half-breed! Would you prefer the grinding of each tooth to rip threw your body instead? Or for this blade to ‘slip’ and remove the only parts of that make you a man? Count! Three!”
This smack was harsher, and stayed down longer.
A shuddering voice was barely heard over the roar of the chainsaw, “Three…”
”Louder half-breed! We want to hear you scream!” Down it came again.
“Four!”
Vincent grinned, “Finally, a result! Now was that so hard little Sephy? Lets continue.”
~
Nanaki lifted up as a familiar mechanical sound echoed on the walls, his head cocking slightly. 'That sounds like Hellmasker's chainsaw!'
As pained cries began to be heard, their sound strangely rhythmic in nature, he paced slightly at Yazoo's side. 'Just what is going on in there?' His worried, one-eyed gaze focused on the dark tunnel, unaware of the small dark spots forming in the Mako pool.
~
Down came the chainsaw once again, shortly followed by a pained shout of ‘Five’. This continued until seventeen, two extra added for the times Sephiroth had refused to count.
Blood covered the back of the General’s thighs, spilling onto the floor around his knees. Ragged pants and the odd whimper left his mouth with each breath as Vincent released the button keeping the instrument on. Cloud looked oddly pale while holding the hair leash, lightly swaying on his feet.
Vincent phased the chainsaw away, along with the Hellmasker’s flesh, “Hmm, I wonder if the taint in your blood has been bled out yet.” Dragging a finger over the shredded flesh, the dark man brought the red fluid to his lips, “Not quite.”
A low rumbling chuckle caught the gunman and the blond's attention, both looking down at the shaking madman, "You fools. You have lost and you don't eve-ek!"
Vincent raised a hand, motioning for Cloud to loosen his hold. Leaning down, he picked up Death Penalty, "Choose your words carefully, Sephiroth, for they may be your last."
The silver-haired man gave a bloody smirk, "The puppet is mine again."
Just then, a howl echoed off the walls, its tone pained and frightened. Cloud immediately turned to leave, "Nanaki!" When he realized Vincent wasn't following, he shouted back, "Come on! We've gotta go!"
Black hair veiled the pale man's eyes as his body shook. A growl pressed out of clenched teeth as the gunman's right arm pulled back before forcefully shoving Death Penalty back inside the former General, cold black and crimson eyes boring into the man with fury, "You dared to touch Master! We will see you in hell, half-breed!"
Blood and gore exploded onto the cavern walls as bullets tore through Sephiroth's body. Cloud felt a wave of nausea but a hand on his shoulder quickly brought his attention back, the golden light in Vincent's eyes grim, "Hold tight. We're going my way, manling."
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SapphireDoG
"With that, he pulled the trigger."
WHEEE!!!! FINALLY! WOOT WOOT! MC and I have benn WAITING for that XD woot I love you! LOVE YOU, YOU EVIL QUEEN OF CLIFFIES!!!
Yummmyyy *purrs* *snicker* hehe Cloud is scared for his own 'man-veggies' now XD hehe
Excellent chapter our wonderful slaver driver. We bow down to your greatness, our Master >:D
Frizz: LOL yes, he is. I think anyone would be scared after hearing something like that.
AnimeFanGrrl-4-Life
BWAHAAHAHAA!!! Excellent, excellent. Bravo! I love the tribute to Kerianya about the cheese grater and Cloud's response to that. Most excellent work as usual dear. Keep it up and I throughly look forward to the next chapter.
Fan-of-u-4-life
* * * * * * *
Frizz: I loved the cheese grater idea so much I had to include it. I hope you enjoy this one.
Kerianya
Oh my GODS! A dedication to little old me ! Thank you sooo much lovely lady, like I said on DA: You've just made my week! And oh yesss it has satisfied the sadistic side of me muchly.
And what a finale! I doubt that Cloud is going to be sleeping easy any time soon.
You know, I can't believe that this is your first fanfiction! I've been writing for years and can't write half as well as you *hugs*
Until next time, my dear,
Kerianya XxX
Frizz: Glad to have made your week hun...and LOL that wasnt quite the finale and yes, it will take some time for Cloud to get over this madness. Actually this is the first time in about four years that I have written anything over a page long.
Fyrbyrd
Oh yeah!!!! Justice in the end!!! Now to Yazoo, please, begging here.
Frizz: NOW justice is served, and Yazoo is next!
Golden Kitsune
OMFG.
u can't leave it there.
at least add in another smut scence.
after Vincent and Cloud tell everyone almost everything on what happened to Sephiroth.
u must add a few more chapters.
its just too good to end.
XD.
ur a Gemini too, huh?
cool.
i have that tattoo'd on the back of my neck, in greek.
lol.
~Golden Kitsune~
Frizz: LOL did you really think I would leave it there? There is too much to finish out
Suki Rios
*looks over the chapter* you know, vincent really should have tormented Seph some more. i was really hoping he'd do the whole 'hard for hours' thing. maybe vinny could waste a down phoenix on seph and prolong his suffering?
Frizz: Your wish is my command!
viva_rose
Ohh the trigger gets pulled! But the question is this: is he mind fucking teh General a bit more before that final blow or is it for reals?
Frizz: You got it! I loved the idea of continuing it like that.
BreaxStrify -==-I'm an acorn small and round, lying on the cold cold ground, everybody steps on me, that is why i'm cracked you see - imma nut ^^-==-
*ahem*
OMG&G I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU LEFT ME LIKE THAT - I MEAN A BULLET UP INTO HIS AS;LDFKJASDFLSKJDFL;DKJF omg&g! @..@
YOU.ARE.GENUIS.AND.AMAZING.BECAUSE i'd never think to 1) shove a gun up Sephy's ass & 2) pull the freaking trigger if he pissed me off....granted i'd love to see what happens with that cheeze grater ;D - maybe that will be my birthday thing...cheeze gratered Sephy parts ^^ thehehe wow i'm a perverted WEIRDO!!!
anyways! - awww thank you for putting Kadaj & Loz's names on Sephy's body - I was like...I hope they are on there..and now they are ^^
and I think I have a small plan forming...the song "Walk This Way" has the right beat for a club right? Idk...I suddenly heard it a few nights ago and was like @o@ ::invisions Yazoo poledancing to that song:: but that's not my request - that's just an idea - a thought - might change the song to something else like...Hollywood Undead because their songs are amazingly perverted...or like something else...::shifty eyes::
but anyways - thank you for updating ^^ made my night - ::sighs:: so far from home but still feeling wonderful right now ^^
~ily~
Frizz: I like that song and yes I will probably use it in Tainted Love for ya hun...personally I see it as a threesome setting...Get Yazoo, Reno...and who knows who else on stage to that one LOL.
Raven
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO................. 'pin the tail of the sephy'.... *snickers* I love it! I'm even saving ur story to a removable drive so i can take it with me because it's sooooo good! can't wait for your next update.
Frizz: I loved putting in that line. And wow, Im flattered that you like my story that much hun. Really.
'CHAOS SPEAKING'
~ (Time and/or story focus shift)
Chapter 52
Laughter filled the small cavern, it's sound mocking and cruel. Cloud's eyes slowly opened, first landing on the sight of teeth and eyes clenched in pain and anger. 'Sephiroth survived that?! No, Vincent must have done something.'
As the gunman's laughter died down, the raven-haired man stood and leaned over Sephiroth, making sure he had the man's full attention, "Did you really think we would let you off that easy, General?" He gave the embedded gun a light tap, the miniscule movement causing the silver-haired man to flinch, "Its interesting how blanks still make it feel like there is fire burning your insides, isn't it? Chaos wanted to do that himself but when I woke up, he decided to let me have the pleasure."
He twisted Death Penalty again with a little push and smirked at the hiss that followed before walking forwards. Vincent stared down at the General, mako eyes glaring up into his, swirling with anger but otherwise the silver haired man was quiet, "I'll bet you thought that when I walked in here, I would bemoan your path in life and grant you mercy because you are Lucrecia's son."
Reaching down with his clawed left hand, Vincent roughly pulled Sephiroth’s head up more, "Well I've got news for you. Lucrecia's son died years ago in Nibelheim. All that I see now is the pathetic remains of a failed experiment."
Scarlet eyes turned from the hissing General, focusing instead on Cloud, "Strife? Since you have decided to grace us with your presence, would you be willing to assist me in a little project?"
Cloud blinked in confusion before the words registered. A large part of him wanted to say no, but something about the cold, calculating gaze told him that such an answer would be incorrect. "Um...sure?"
“Good answer, now come over here.”
Vincent wanted to laugh at the blond male, whom nervously dragged his body from the wall and floor, taking timid steps towards him and the General. Chaos’ voice took over his own, a fanged grin spreading Vincent’s face, “Truly amusing, human. What is it you fear?”
Cloud shuddered, still not used to the constant switching between demon and host, crossed his arms as he glanced at his one time hero, “I don’t…uh…fear anything. I just don’t know why you want me to help you with..this.”
"Because I can smell the fear and nervousness rolling off of you at the moment and if you are going to remain here, then I would rather have you doing something instead of just making some of the others in our head antsy." Vincent bent over and picked up the homemade ‘leash’, making sure to tighten the collar a little before holding it out to the blond. Cloud’s brows lifted before reaching out and taking the offering a bit awkwardly, ”Simply tug and it will halt any protest or snarky comment the half-breed makes. We shall take care of the rest, that is, unless at one point you to wish to help by other means than holding the rope.”
”The leash is fine…”
Vincent shrugged, “Very well then.”
"Can't deal with me alone, coward? Guess not only are you an abomination but-" He was cut off by a forceful pull but the damage was already done.
Scarlet eyes flashed with fury, "Coward? You dare call ME a coward you miserable wretch?!"
Scarlet orbs flashed black as a wave of power flowed through Vincent’s chest to his right hand, the gunman ignoring the twinge of pain. Before he knew it, his fist went flying down onto Sephiroth’s dislocated shoulder, a sickening crunch and scream coming from the man’s body.
Pulling his hand back, Vincent moved to grab at the leash and yank, only to find that his hand was now covered in purple fur, fingertips now graced with black claws. He looked down at his arm with wonder and amusement, ”Hmm, it appears absorbing Sin makes the transformations controllable and nearly painless. I did not even notice.”
Fur slid back into pale skin as the claws receded as well, "Well this changes things a little. I wonder..."
He focused on his right hand for a moment, watching as the skin began to change into the sickly green of Death Gigas, electricity dancing between his fingertips. A sadistic grin grew on his face as he placed a finger over one of the many open wounds on the silver-haired man's body. Cloud immediatly jumped back, releasing the braided hair as he was also shocked by the current now running through the bound man. Vincent pulled the finger back, willing his arm to return to normal, "My apologies Cloud. We did not think it would jump to you as well. I will warn you should I decide to do that again."
Chaos once again broke through Vincent’s voice, chuckling darkly as Cloud picked the leash back up. 'THIS COULD BE INTERESTING, HOST.'
Vincent grinned, “Yes. Hmm, I wonder...”
His wrist flicked and the skin started to turn black, torn and shredded gloves covering his hand. Fingers closed over a fazing object, a handle materializing in his grasp before the engine and chains of Hellmasker’s chainsaw appeared. Vincent chuckled, a dark shadow covering his face as he turned his eyes toward fearful Mako blue, “Well well, isn’t this handy.”
”Oh Holy…”
The gunner smirked, left claw grasping the string of the engine and giving a yank. The whirl of a blade filled the cavern, the steady grinding of gears a menacing sound. Vincent lifted the revolving blade to eye level, touching a claw from his left hand to the spinning flat side. The nail was taken down almost immediately from the friction. “I think it is high time someone threw you over their knee, Sephiroth, for being a bad little child. What do you think, Cloud?”
The blond muttered under his breath, hands fidgeting with the leash, “A few years too late really…”
Vincent laughed before reaching down to grasp Death Penalty. Without warning, he ripped the gun from the General’s ass causing Sephiroth to scream once again, a curse flying from his lips. The gunner examined the barrels of his weapon, grimacing at the coat of tainted blood and skin tissue. “My, you seem to have gotten my favorite gun filthy. I should make you clean it though maybe after.”
Setting the gun down, Vincent placed his foot onto Sephiroth’s back and leaned forwards on it with his left arm, dangerous blade hovering over pale cheeks. Blood dripped to the ground from the torn entrance, ragged pants leaving the General’s chest.
Cloud glanced at the hovering blade, “Vincent? Are you actually going to…”
The dark haired male smiled, almost innocently, “To spank him? Why yes, I am. I have a feeling that our dear little Sephy was never spanked. I do believe it’s about time we showed him what happens to naughty children.”
Sephiroth jerked his head, almost making Cloud lose his loose grip on the leash, “I refuse suffer this humiliation and remain sile-erk!"
The blond swordsman fought to keep from smirking as he cut off the silver-haired man's air. Vincent noticed however and grinned, "You've been wanting to do that a while, haven't you?”
"Years."
Vincent’s grin widened but he didn’t reply. Instead, he dug his heel into Sephiroth’s spine and lowered the spinning flat side of the blade to soft flesh. The friction split into the soft tissue, tearing a layer from the top of the General’s buttock. The silver haired man hissed out a ‘Fuck!’ while trying to flinch away from the contact.
A dark brow lifted, ”What a potty mouth you have Sephiroth.”
Cloud choked back a snicker at the gunman's mockingly parental tone. Pulling the chainsaw back, Vincent released the pressure on Sephiroth’s back and stood by the his bleeding backside, ”For being so rude, I am going to make you count. And for every hit you don’t count, 1 more will be added to how many you get. Let’s start with 15, shall we?”
Sephiroth growled, earning a tug from the leash and silencing the rumble. Jade eyes turned to glare at Cloud, who made show of waving the leash around a little, blue eyes dancing. There was no warning before the rotating object was brought down onto his ass, successfully tearing more skin apart. The General grunted but remained silent, ”Count!”
Again the object came down, but Sephiroth still refused to speak.
Vincent frowned, eyes flashing gold before Chaos’ voice filled the room with an angry growl, “You insufferable half-breed! Would you prefer the grinding of each tooth to rip threw your body instead? Or for this blade to ‘slip’ and remove the only parts of that make you a man? Count! Three!”
This smack was harsher, and stayed down longer.
A shuddering voice was barely heard over the roar of the chainsaw, “Three…”
”Louder half-breed! We want to hear you scream!” Down it came again.
“Four!”
Vincent grinned, “Finally, a result! Now was that so hard little Sephy? Lets continue.”
~
Nanaki lifted up as a familiar mechanical sound echoed on the walls, his head cocking slightly. 'That sounds like Hellmasker's chainsaw!'
As pained cries began to be heard, their sound strangely rhythmic in nature, he paced slightly at Yazoo's side. 'Just what is going on in there?' His worried, one-eyed gaze focused on the dark tunnel, unaware of the small dark spots forming in the Mako pool.
~
Down came the chainsaw once again, shortly followed by a pained shout of ‘Five’. This continued until seventeen, two extra added for the times Sephiroth had refused to count.
Blood covered the back of the General’s thighs, spilling onto the floor around his knees. Ragged pants and the odd whimper left his mouth with each breath as Vincent released the button keeping the instrument on. Cloud looked oddly pale while holding the hair leash, lightly swaying on his feet.
Vincent phased the chainsaw away, along with the Hellmasker’s flesh, “Hmm, I wonder if the taint in your blood has been bled out yet.” Dragging a finger over the shredded flesh, the dark man brought the red fluid to his lips, “Not quite.”
A low rumbling chuckle caught the gunman and the blond's attention, both looking down at the shaking madman, "You fools. You have lost and you don't eve-ek!"
Vincent raised a hand, motioning for Cloud to loosen his hold. Leaning down, he picked up Death Penalty, "Choose your words carefully, Sephiroth, for they may be your last."
The silver-haired man gave a bloody smirk, "The puppet is mine again."
Just then, a howl echoed off the walls, its tone pained and frightened. Cloud immediately turned to leave, "Nanaki!" When he realized Vincent wasn't following, he shouted back, "Come on! We've gotta go!"
Black hair veiled the pale man's eyes as his body shook. A growl pressed out of clenched teeth as the gunman's right arm pulled back before forcefully shoving Death Penalty back inside the former General, cold black and crimson eyes boring into the man with fury, "You dared to touch Master! We will see you in hell, half-breed!"
Blood and gore exploded onto the cavern walls as bullets tore through Sephiroth's body. Cloud felt a wave of nausea but a hand on his shoulder quickly brought his attention back, the golden light in Vincent's eyes grim, "Hold tight. We're going my way, manling."
____________________________________________________________________________________
SapphireDoG
"With that, he pulled the trigger."
WHEEE!!!! FINALLY! WOOT WOOT! MC and I have benn WAITING for that XD woot I love you! LOVE YOU, YOU EVIL QUEEN OF CLIFFIES!!!
Yummmyyy *purrs* *snicker* hehe Cloud is scared for his own 'man-veggies' now XD hehe
Excellent chapter our wonderful slaver driver. We bow down to your greatness, our Master >:D
Frizz: LOL yes, he is. I think anyone would be scared after hearing something like that.
AnimeFanGrrl-4-Life
BWAHAAHAHAA!!! Excellent, excellent. Bravo! I love the tribute to Kerianya about the cheese grater and Cloud's response to that. Most excellent work as usual dear. Keep it up and I throughly look forward to the next chapter.
Fan-of-u-4-life
* * * * * * *
Frizz: I loved the cheese grater idea so much I had to include it. I hope you enjoy this one.
Kerianya
Oh my GODS! A dedication to little old me ! Thank you sooo much lovely lady, like I said on DA: You've just made my week! And oh yesss it has satisfied the sadistic side of me muchly.
And what a finale! I doubt that Cloud is going to be sleeping easy any time soon.
You know, I can't believe that this is your first fanfiction! I've been writing for years and can't write half as well as you *hugs*
Until next time, my dear,
Kerianya XxX
Frizz: Glad to have made your week hun...and LOL that wasnt quite the finale and yes, it will take some time for Cloud to get over this madness. Actually this is the first time in about four years that I have written anything over a page long.
Fyrbyrd
Oh yeah!!!! Justice in the end!!! Now to Yazoo, please, begging here.
Frizz: NOW justice is served, and Yazoo is next!
Golden Kitsune
OMFG.
u can't leave it there.
at least add in another smut scence.
after Vincent and Cloud tell everyone almost everything on what happened to Sephiroth.
u must add a few more chapters.
its just too good to end.
XD.
ur a Gemini too, huh?
cool.
i have that tattoo'd on the back of my neck, in greek.
lol.
~Golden Kitsune~
Frizz: LOL did you really think I would leave it there? There is too much to finish out
Suki Rios
*looks over the chapter* you know, vincent really should have tormented Seph some more. i was really hoping he'd do the whole 'hard for hours' thing. maybe vinny could waste a down phoenix on seph and prolong his suffering?
Frizz: Your wish is my command!
viva_rose
Ohh the trigger gets pulled! But the question is this: is he mind fucking teh General a bit more before that final blow or is it for reals?
Frizz: You got it! I loved the idea of continuing it like that.
BreaxStrify -==-I'm an acorn small and round, lying on the cold cold ground, everybody steps on me, that is why i'm cracked you see - imma nut ^^-==-
*ahem*
OMG&G I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU LEFT ME LIKE THAT - I MEAN A BULLET UP INTO HIS AS;LDFKJASDFLSKJDFL;DKJF omg&g! @..@
YOU.ARE.GENUIS.AND.AMAZING.BECAUSE i'd never think to 1) shove a gun up Sephy's ass & 2) pull the freaking trigger if he pissed me off....granted i'd love to see what happens with that cheeze grater ;D - maybe that will be my birthday thing...cheeze gratered Sephy parts ^^ thehehe wow i'm a perverted WEIRDO!!!
anyways! - awww thank you for putting Kadaj & Loz's names on Sephy's body - I was like...I hope they are on there..and now they are ^^
and I think I have a small plan forming...the song "Walk This Way" has the right beat for a club right? Idk...I suddenly heard it a few nights ago and was like @o@ ::invisions Yazoo poledancing to that song:: but that's not my request - that's just an idea - a thought - might change the song to something else like...Hollywood Undead because their songs are amazingly perverted...or like something else...::shifty eyes::
but anyways - thank you for updating ^^ made my night - ::sighs:: so far from home but still feeling wonderful right now ^^
~ily~
Frizz: I like that song and yes I will probably use it in Tainted Love for ya hun...personally I see it as a threesome setting...Get Yazoo, Reno...and who knows who else on stage to that one LOL.
Raven
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO................. 'pin the tail of the sephy'.... *snickers* I love it! I'm even saving ur story to a removable drive so i can take it with me because it's sooooo good! can't wait for your next update.
Frizz: I loved putting in that line. And wow, Im flattered that you like my story that much hun. Really.