My Loyal Knight

Hi peoples this is my first FF9 story and its about my favorite characters Steiner and Garnet finding love. In my story Garnet does not meet Zidane and she is also 18. Even though she doesn’t meet Zidane she will meet some of the other charaters.

Disclaimer: Sadly, I own nothing T_T

I turned for the hundredth time in my bed and sighed. I sat up in my Queen sized canopy bed, pushing the white silk covers off and swung my legs out of the bed. These past few days I found myself unable to go to sleep. Standing, I walked over to the huge window that that over looked the entire town of Alexandria. Pushing the window open, I gazed up at the full moon, its serene light bathing my body, making my skin appear to glow. I then looked down at the town; they were able to find sweet slumber while I had not. The source of my insomnia was unhappiness. One would think that being a princess would make anyone happy but no I was not happy in the least. The reason for my unhappiness was my mother, Queen Brahne. My mother had been acting very strange since her father's death. I longed to see the world, explore new places, and maybe find my one true love but my mother would not let me outside the castle. Mother was always telling me that a princess should not have such thoughts, that I should be concentrating on being a better princess. I did the same thing over and over again; Practice being proper, going to balls, doing my studies. I wanted to travel, I wanted to discover new things, but more than anything else I wanted freedom. To do as I wanted, when I wanted to.
She gave one last glance at the beautiful town below her sighing once more and turned around walking back to her bed. She climbed in her bed and after a few hours of staring at the mystical moon, finally fell asleep.

I know its really short but what do you think?
Was is good ?
Was it bad ?
Was it sooo darn bad that you had to sit on a roof and cry?
Please review and tell me what you think.