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for Under the blue light

by Shadowgirl669

person z32
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!!! ToT <3
person CalliopePurple
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The world needs more Cid/Vincent fics, especially well-written ones like this. English might not be your first language, but you did a great job with it, especially with the dialogue. I, personally, thought the location of the waterfall cave was a little odd for a first encounter, but it works.

There were a few spelling and grammar issues, but they're easily overlooked because this was good to read right before I head off to bed. Maybe it'll give me good dreams hehehe.

CP