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VERY nice that you dedicated this chapter to me, thank you and in my opinion, Fucked up games definetely, Danielle'd sense them before they could get home...or find someway to distract them.........ON WITH THE PARTY DAMN YOU WE DIDN'T WAIT THIS LONG FOR A SHORT CHAPTER!!!!! MORE DAMN YOU MORE....DON'T MAKE ME START CRYING AND TALK TO WIND!!!!!

What happened to your update? I want to read more! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!


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*pout* you said a couple of days.......it's been over a week!!!!!!!!

Don't make me talk to Donovan! OR WIND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Great, funny hilarious story, now can you get your ass busy and type some more?

Don't make me hunt you down and tie you to a computer chair.

I know two people that do know where you live......now update!

I like the story, honestly I do, I only have a few...things to say......


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LOL That was oddly funny, sound a lot like Flame to do that too. Well now that I have read it I can see how it makes her happy, you must update soon before you irk her.

hmm... to me, this just seems like a stupid excuse for a virgin to swear a lot. it's actually annoyingly not-funny, which is something you should probably fix given that you called this shit humour. aside from that, if you're ever in town and want casual sex, look me up, i'm always open to things like that. have a wonderful afternoon.

Sephy should get laid by Reno.........don't ask me why i have no clue. Just a stupid plot idea. ^_^ As for drinking......Embarassing cross dressing pics should be taken!!!!!! Bring in the Saiyuki guys if you've seen the show..........hope i helped just a little.

um, Danielle can table dance....Sephiroth should get laid by...JING the bandit king, and Kir. um let's see gotta have a chugging party.....and stripping...and fucking everywhere.....hmm...music by slipnot.....and disturbed, and Evanesence, and um.....a perfect circle.....and um...Yuffie sneaking in and getting ass raped by a random, drukenly, well-endowed party goer...
Reno: MORE CONDOMS I INTEND ON GETTING LAID MANY TIMES!
Sephiroth: tell me you were kidding about....me with a guy...
Jing: how do you think I FEEL!!!!!
Anyway as I was saying......oh and I think a Shera should try to show up.....and meet an untimely end with a level one Hell's Fury.....hmmm
Cid: Die bitch die!!!
Down boy, ooooooo some of the demons could stay for the party.......
Vincent:....tell me you are kidding.
Nope now shut up.
Let me see, hmmmmm oh Danielle can mix suicide drinks.
Everyone: *gulps*
What they aren't that ba-ad.
Everyone: yes they are.....we still can't even get live 2 to work on the poor saps you gave it to last time...
I could give it to Yuffie.
Beth: YES!!!!!
Vincent: I wouldn't mind watching that.
O.k. Yuffie it is...you know it isn't my fault you all can't stand my drinks.
Beth: it made me sick last time, I had to use a cure 3!
I told you not to drink it so fast
Cid: I wanna try one of these drinks.
Sure......can I get a life materia on hand just in case
Sephiroth: I got mine...now let's go finish getting ready for the party.
O.k. that's all for now if I think of more, I'll let you know, Tchao for now!

YES!!!! you updated!!!! PARTY PARTY PARTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sephiroth: I got the grocery list....be back in a few.
Beth: I got decorations!!!
I GOT THE BOOZE!!!
Beth: We aren't old enough to drink that...
SO.....you can do without, *lights cigar* you can watch me drink it for you then.
Beth: shoulda kept my mouth closed.
Sephiroth: Do I get to drink?
Sure why not, not like you'll tell your parents when they get back...that could be grounds for a level two Hell's fury...
Sephiroth and Beth: gulp, yes ma'am
Anyway great story....can't wait for the party...and please...no more aftermath of the aftermath of the aftermath.....next chapter PARTY TIME!!!!!
Sephiroth and Beth: YEAH!!!!!!
Now more please!

you said you were gonna update the other day.......WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER?!?!?!

I'm calm......but really I want my next chapter.....please?????????????????????????????????????????