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for Fast Food

by SailorPoison

person Varen
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the ending was....well surprising? i had to stop laughing before i reviewed. Great story! I like it. I thought the secret ingrediant would be something else.....
person Auron Revolutionist on AFF.net
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHA! I knew what would be in his sauce! *dies laughing* Beautiful! I love it!
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls to floor* OMG I had an idea what it was. 2 funny!! Really cute story, had me rolling!!
person Little girl
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.............hah....hahahaaaahhhh hh aaahh... hah...




Ew.




person little girls\' big sister
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's funny^^
But I would like more yaoi........ ummmm.... sorry, sis!
I know you don't like yaoi! But I'm oldest, so stfu!