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for Zell's Sudden Realization

by Anchoret

schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, gotta love FFVIII, and *gotta* (I mean GOTTA!) love Zelly!
I love how you write - a good long read is a nice thing sometimes, but I must say that the stories that stick with me the longest are... more condensed? Yes, like Campbell's soup, before you add the water, lol. More flavor for the spoonful, less bulk.
I also think you found an original attitude here with the (beloved) Squall/Zell pairing. It was... real!
And real good!
More, more-more-more.. more. Whatever it is you write, just give us more. You're an original, I think. ( :

- DeeDubya
person QueenAdreena
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny ending, heh. Nice, could've done with being a bit longer and possibly more descriptive.