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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good! Yeah another Squall/Tidus pairing. Is it me or is this pairing becoming popular/ Anyway, update soon. Love the pairing.
Only question, Ifrit and Shiva are both GF's, but are also aeons, so are there respective aeon partners going to be replaced by something else, like...say Leviaten?
Only question, Ifrit and Shiva are both GF's, but are also aeons, so are there respective aeon partners going to be replaced by something else, like...say Leviaten?
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the direction that your story is headed, but the writing seems a bit... rushed. Blunt. Maybe try adding more depth, detail and dialogue to the major scenes.
But with all things considered: your story idea is fabulous; however, your writing and scene transitions are too hasty (making the characters seem, at least to me, a bit OCC)
But with all things considered: your story idea is fabulous; however, your writing and scene transitions are too hasty (making the characters seem, at least to me, a bit OCC)
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of a crossover and you do it quite well. You should write more. But you need to learn to proof-read and correct bad grammar and spelling mistakes (sorry). Other than that it was really good.... Update!
Phoenix
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting crossover. even though i've never actually played final fantasy 8 i know the basic charaters. nosy Yuna! lol. Hope you continue. It would be interesting! ^_^