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February 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
YES!! This is a great story. Loved the lemon parts. Vivi is even more me now (I have Vivi as my Avatar on some sites). The only thing I don't like is the after comment at the end that seems to hint at Yaoiness. I can find it fun with some anal toys and that but NO on yaoi (straight male here).
But yea. Expertly written. Great build up. Good detail and it moves along at good pace. I also found your directors' cometary script to be hilarious. I'll be checking out your profile and looking for more.
But yea. Expertly written. Great build up. Good detail and it moves along at good pace. I also found your directors' cometary script to be hilarious. I'll be checking out your profile and looking for more.
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I wonder why I can't go to chapter 3...
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Camon, where's the next chapter?
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not entirely sure if I should smack you for using the minor-Vivi or hug you for making this story at all. Although the dialogue could bear to loosen up a bit, your story thus far doesn't have anything to detract from the overall experience. All-in-all, keep up the good work. I like seeing someone who can actually write with proper grammar.
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, c'mon mate.. update the fic! =(
It's really cool.. can't wait to read the rest.. though any information on where Kuja likes it is... well.. GROSS xD
It's really cool.. can't wait to read the rest.. though any information on where Kuja likes it is... well.. GROSS xD
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June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha.. This is actually rather interesting. Keep writing. :)
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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If I could rate this, I would. Five of five! ^^ You're doing very well, coming back from your writer's block.
~Pluto
~Pluto