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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story. It was very interesting. I'll never be able to play the game again, and not think about this. Cool.
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree, there was a strangely depressing aura throughout the story. Beautifully done. I hope there is a sequel, 'cause I really wanna know what was wrong with him.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE HELL???! This is a GREAT start, hell I hope you continue this! 'cause I'm ready for more.
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was pretty good, but I’ve always liked Cloud having a little more of the dominating role in bed, but it was still a really good read :D
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good. There was something very sad about the entire story, but in a good way of course. This was very different from the typical Cloud/Tifa lemon, and felt more in tune with the game, at least, at that point of it. The only nitpick I have is that, unless she also had a little too much to drink, I don't think Tifa would take things so far with a, to her understanding, heavily intoxicated Cloud. Obviously, if she knew what was really wrong with him at that point, she'd be even less likely to do such a thing. Nevertheless, very well done.