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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sephiroth, you...evil...evil...man :) I don't think this story is gonna have a happy ending, huh?
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. You do reallywell on the character for someone whos practially ignored in the series.....well at least in that way. They give youvery little information to go on. You're doing very well! Keep it up!
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Plz continue
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my! I like how you take things slow and that this story isn't just an excuse for smut. The bad thing with this site is that it doesn't have enough stories with a decent plot. I enjoy a story with a more mature content like most other persons, but if I just wanted to read porn I would just buy an Harlequin.
Rufus hasn't learned from his father's mistakes, has he? What is it always with those scientists that believe they can control nature? Not everything has to do with the DNA of a human. Ever heard of the element of soul, people?
Rufus hasn't learned from his father's mistakes, has he? What is it always with those scientists that believe they can control nature? Not everything has to do with the DNA of a human. Ever heard of the element of soul, people?
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was quick! *blushes* The chapter, I mean ^-^ I like how Tifa decided to fight back in the only way she could. But, it will backfire eventually, no?
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What, two chapters already? You're on a roll here. So, has Sephiroth met his match? Cloud might be strong in a physical level, but I think Tifa is the one capable to take on Sephiroth on a mental level. Let the games begin.
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, four things running throuhg my head after reading that. Rage, shame, pervert(not a real emotion) and glee. In short Loved how the chapter went. Only bad note I will add is you forgot some words in some sentences. Had to reread them to guess to whom they referring to. Also you can miss a few days to make a longer chapter, makes it worthwhile to wait ^_^b.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You’re writing is excellent! Please continue soon!
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.......*Hides the blushing along with the wicked smile* I really can not wait to read how this will turn out.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. I can't wait for the next one. ^^