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Tease! You are a big tease!!! :p But I love it!

Arghh! Hetro with older woman! (gouges out eyes) Nah just kidding, its all good, prefer yaoi but Edea is hot, and has a cool dress sense. I hope Reno sorts out Cid next, (after Squall and Rinoa) I can sort of imagine Cid being an in the closet bisexual who hasn't been sleeping with his wife because he loves her and feels guilty for having sex with men while on trips to Deling. Wait a sec, Holy Crap on a gunstick what if Cid was doing Caraway?! (shudder) the threesome between those three (cidxEdeaxCaraway) would definetly be damaging to the mental ego of Squall and Rinoa...imagine..Squall's boss doing his girlfriend's dad...urgh Vein..twitching in forehead... Excuse me while I wash my brain with soap and bleach. But what a challenge! Bet nobodys thought of that one. Might be interesting to write just for the hell of it, if you can fit that in, I'll be well impressed. But if you don't well, fair enough, I was tramatised for just thinking it, let alone if I read it. I'm always surprised at how few spellng mistakes you have, do you write your on microsoft word and spellcheck? Gonna put my own fiction up soon fingers crossed! Anyways, keep me updated!
Zannie

Aw, even when Reno tries to behave himself he still gets laid!

Oh wow! Ya know - I knew Edea was a little sex kitten in diguise, and you just proved it. Cid's an ass and he deserves to have his whiped for letting such a vixen wilt in the shadows. Good going!

HEHEH. Squall is such a tease. Can't believe Fujin has a crush on Seifer. Guess that rules out SquallxRenoxSeifer. Ah well, RinoaxSquallxReno is just as good. I think maybe Reno could save Edea's and Cid's marriage? This is hotting up, can't wait for the next one. Reno kinda reminds me of James Bond, in the way in one film as the ladies leave one by one, he tells them a time, 7, 9, 11 o clock and they all go off grinning thinking their the only ones, except the last one who doesn't seem to give a damn. Heh, almost expecting something like that for the finale! Haha. Anyways, let me know when the next one's up!

Oh, damn, Squall taking charge of Reno! Hot hot hot hot! And a threesome coming up...don't know if I can handle it.

Okay - I always knew Squall was a changling, and you just proved it. Hot!

Poor Fujin - but maybe it was enough of a fire under her (ahem)ass to get her going. Can't wait to see what happens between A certain Redhead and a certain raven haired sorceress.

Personnally I'd have asked to join them. lol

meeeeeehhh. That was such a short teasy chapter! Glad you updated though, was worried that you were gonna just leave it like that, and that would suck as this rocks and is one of my faves. Normally I don't review but I like this alot as its well written and interesting. Keep it up!