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by synthetikmancer

person SinkingIntoDarkness
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was deep! Wonderful! *huggles* You are just so angst and great at writting in general! ^^ I just love it and it touched my heart ^^. That's all I can say because it was just that deep ^^. Wonderful job!!

Basai ;P
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. Very well written, and like you, I love his character, though he's not my favorite. (Squall is) lol. I saw you made a request for my Redheaded Stranger fic *grins* You're hoping Laguna will see a little action. Sadly, I don't think I can fit it in, BUT, I am planning a sequel already, so maybe next time. I think I'll be reading more of your fics. Great job on this!
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know I have said it before, but you really do get into the characters minds. I feel like I am in there with them, and reading/watching their thoughts.--That my darkling is wonderful writing, to take your reader to that level.

Wonderfully done, as always.

~Tainted