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â€‹В "I think the orange colour is a good one" "What?" "I said that the typical shape of heart, that one that on the eponymous card suit, - originally it was the shape of a dickhead" "What?" "Are you a broken record or just deaf?I said I read in some magazine that the typical shape of heart is actually the shape of dickhead cause the real heart doesn`t look like that, and what do you think?" "Why do you tell me this?'" "And why fucking not? I read that article in magazine, it gave me the sharp impression, and so I want to talk about this with someone"

So how do you think - is it true that it is actually mean dickhead, personally I think it is possible since people tend to mistake sex for love. But I thought dickhead is round, but maybe dickhead of humans look different
Hey, let`s compare alright - I will show you my dickhead and you will say if it looks like that one of human or not
May I put it in your mouth so you can suck it?" "no!" "why? alright, I guess I can find the other way to have you" he said easily blocking Cloud`s strikes, beat sword out of Cloud`s grasp, tying him with his own belt, moving to Cloud`s ass and starting to grope this, then he get the hero`s bum naked, enjoying humiliation of enemy, grinning evilly at the sight and took a picture. Then he unfastened his own pants, revealing aroused column of flesh and stick it right inside enemy`s ass, Cloud let out suppressed moan of pain and bit his bottom lips when the silverhead pushed hard and thick dick deeper into his virgin ass, causing him to squeeze eyes shut and let out evil tears down the face, Cloud felt like being impaled with the stick and the fact how humiliated the situation was doesn`t helped, he didn`t know how to live with it, and enemy doesn`t help it, just moved, causing him even more pain in destroyed rectum, in the part of his body, which wasn`t ready to being used in such way, he was kind grateful, the enemy seemed to be annoyed by the noise and covered his mouth, muting his moans and screams "it is incredible, so satisfying to fuck the guy who older than me, and not just any older guy, but a hero, and love interest of the hottest girl on this planet" he said, moving the penis inside the entrance of human, clearly enjoying and videotaping the sight of the hero`s ass being abused like that, the evil teen even pull out almost completely to take a picture of the enemy`s ass oozing the teen`s cum from the reddened orifice, cloud moaned into his hand in defeat and humiliation, continuing dropping the tears at continuous abuse of his ass under the evil and mocking remarks. Enemy giggled each time he remembered how righteous, heroical and flawless and tough this abused man seemed to be. Kadaj decided to spoke up his musing to his victim: 'it wouldn`t be ended till you apologize" he said, continuing pushing his blood covered dick inside abusing ass "till you lick my boots and confessing me that you are not as tough as you pretended to be and that you are gay, do it, or I let my brothers use you and they wouldn`t be as gentle as I am, believe me"

Cloud felt his heart is shattered, he used to be a glorious and beloved, being look up too, he has lots of girls who have a crush on him, he couldn`t imagine something like this would happen to him. Yet, here he was - in some dirty wasteland on his four with his pants down, his ass exposed and being pounded by the alien hostile teen who mocking him and insulting him. Kadaj felt good, the fact he is anal-fucking the arrogant hero defender of humanity,model family guys beloved by lots of girls, the fact he is ruining his life like this, taken away everything he cherished, shaken everything he believed in was great. He felt like he doesn`t even want to find Jenova at the time, it was now distant and pale for him, now indulging himself in what was really pleasant for him was great. even if he would fail it wouldn`t be mattered, he would leave his mark, the scar in Cloud`s soul, the true nightmare, memories the bitterness of which would poison everything in hero`s life. While the arrogant hero felt sharp pai of unwanted intrusion, then tearing pain when the teen mived further, Kadaj felt pleasure from the soft flesh engulfing his sensitive member and from the fact of disgracing the hero

​Kadaj appeared from his hideout and after the seconds, the fat bastard got sliced vertically, blood flooded the blond and horrified he stared at the furiously looking, blood striken old enemy. "I guess it is exactly one of these innocent people like you like to say" said silverhaired youth, I`m not human, aren`t I? tell me, is this thing as funny as in your fantasies when it happened to you and not to others, you dirty narcissistic jerk" said Kadaj to numbed youth in black dress and started to beat him, adding blond`s blood to the blood of killed fat bastard. "You will regret you were born whore, I saw everything in your mind, I know you expect me to forgive it, to let it go, to agreed with you that it is nothing or that I`m deserving it - but I wouldn`t do that" said the youth, grabbing battered Cloud from behind, the blond gulped when he felt bulge pressed to his backside while both of youth`s hands were rested on his sides, pressing his on hands to his sides and holding him tightly. Kadaj had had girlfriends, - though no one from them actually loved him, usually it was loose women, who needed only fucking or some profit from him and never really interested in him as a person - he had crush only on girls, but he had to admit that situation is arousing and glorious. Enemy`s half-naked butt in women panties felt good, as well as the fact how fruitlessly squirmed in stronger man`s embrace(in this fic Kadaj is stronger because he is extraterrestrial), Kadaj wished he can see the look onto definitely frightened blond, finally not so arrogant and cold, aren`t we? Kadaj remembered evil smirk of Cloud during the fight, and how blonde bastard stood over him with his big assed sword clearly enjoying the sight of Kadaj hung on the cliff, and of course he couldn`t forget disturbing images from Cloud`s mind, silverhead`s face darkened "what is this Cloud, not as tough, don`t you?" he rubbed his aroused crotch against Cloud`s butt again "Not as tough as when you imagined me gaging on your cock, or ask you to fuck me because my brothers dont respect me?"he replaced one of his hands at Cloud`s throat and squeezed it, not enough to suffocate to death, but clearly enough to make him uncomfortable, at the same time slightly changing position, sliding penis teasingly against Cloud`s thighs, enjoying feeling of how helpless his arrogant and cruel enemy now, he is going to have fun with him, he had time. And he will enjoy his time, tying enemy`s hands behind his back and threw him onto the bed, in expectation of claiming this heroical arrogant ass, driving dick deep inside his ass, forcing screams full of pain out of the defeated hero - Kadaj felt evil delight, like a lion reached prey, he felt like now his bloody feast would be arranged and nothing will stop him and no one would blame him cause no one needs a hero who got fucked into his ass.

​with Kadaj there wasn`t uneasiness or shame, there wasn`t fear he would behave with you arrogant or like you are filthy
There wasn`t any filthy or disparaging remarks from him, it felt so good to caress and explore his precious body, see him smiling, caress his face. Probing his body, taking column of intimate flesh in your mouth and suck it like candy, making him moan and cover eyes - it seems it is his first time, well, you are older than him so it is should be expected, his sincere bliss - how he really enjoying this and not the fact that him having it may gain him the higher status in the eyes of society - how I used to think and how my ex is still thinking, he really enjoyed the process and was eager to try other part of coitus, his face is so innocent and smile is so joyful, he really is cute - even when he pull out his wet dick out your cunt and asks to suck it again but with no demanding tone your previous guys used. His pure bliss when he spilled his semen into your mouth, when he made the second round with you, keeping you firmly in his embrace and moaning loudly, kissing you
Some guys found it disgusting to kiss you after you give them blowjob, others didn`t mind it like your ex, but he was the other extreme point - he was a pervert, kissing you despite you just given him blowjob, drooling other transsexuals and pornactresses was all nothing but the parts of his immature rebellion against social norms and standards, which was very stupid since such norms are various and the can be contradicted to one another. Kadaj didn`t use you like this, you weren`t the instrument for his stupid protest and immature gesture of rebellion, he kissed you just cause he wanted to kiss you.

bullshit it is - there is no way kadaj will allow it - if he ever find out that cloud is just a fucked up pervert who played into flawless hero and the model family guy - all model family guys are perverts and psycho - he would beat shit out of cloud, rape him himself and ideotape it and sent this to the whole avalanceВ 

This is awesome.Yes I felt sadness and sorrow and lot of others things... You really should do a chapter two for this fic!
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ahhh pleaseeeee continue this!! i want to know what happens after!

ahhhh!~!!!!!poor kadaj!T_T i loved it, i reallyyyyyyyy wanna kno wat happens next, i also wanna see wat will devolp between them! pretty please..with cherrys on top?

oh, poor kadaj was jus curious, i felt sad too!!! *cries* :)

I did feel sad at the end. Thing is, I can honestly see something like this *really* happening. Anyway, you portrayed the characters very well. If you ever consider making a sequel to this story I'll look forward to it, but at the same time can understand why you wouldn't want to. :P But very good! Keep up the excellent work!

i can imagine you feeling sad. i must say, i feel a little sour myself. this is the second time i read a fic from you in which cloud is a bit of a prick. ( Maybe you just dont like him all that much?) i think it is hard for people, to know how easy it is sometimes to go too far, especially for young people who's bodies have the desire but their minds are just not ready to deal with that sort of thing, especially when you are faced with someone who is very experienced and wants, demands things from you that you arent ready for. ( i had the same sort of thing with my ex husband, but i wasnt physically harmed like kadaj was though, just mentally) i have written about a rape too, and even though it was kind of neccecary for the plot, i felt like you did.