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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was so sad! -speechless-
I honestly didn't think that you were going to end it like that...
Yeah, Just...Wow...
It would be awesome if you wrote more on this, but if your intentions were just to make it a one-shot, then I respect that as well...
I honestly didn't think that you were going to end it like that...
Yeah, Just...Wow...
It would be awesome if you wrote more on this, but if your intentions were just to make it a one-shot, then I respect that as well...
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my god that is sad! its almost horrible in that nauseating yet innocence -gone-wrong erotic sort of way...my goodness you portrayed Kadaj's mental level well!
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February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm very sad now
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey... Maybe I can brive you with fan art based off your fic in order to get you to write a follow up to this? :D You can see my artwork under the same name at FanartCentral. ;) I'm curently working on one for another ficcer... I make good on such promises. Pretty please? :D
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw... ;_; I loved it until he hurt Kadaje....Poor Kadaje. Could you write another chapter? I hope Cloud can make it up to him. Kadaje is strong and has been through more painful things than this.... I'm sure if Cloud is there for him, he could be alright. I want this to have a happy ending so bad. Kadaje is such a tragic character.
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Meep. I was sad. My bottom lip was like trembling. i was like*no cry no, cry. me no cry!* I felt sorry for Khajag but for Cloudie too.But then again, Cloudie basically raped Khajag...bad of him that was.
I really like this ficie, it was really good. I like the ending too(not so much the wape part, but that added to plot, ye?) It was really good, it moved me. Cheers!
I really like this ficie, it was really good. I like the ending too(not so much the wape part, but that added to plot, ye?) It was really good, it moved me. Cheers!
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Fantastik!!!! Bloody amazing.
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want you to continue this storyyy~! XD I wanna know if Kadaj can ever forgive Cloud and if Cloud can ever forgive himself and if they'll ever be together again and, and, and... XD This was an awesome story, it was, and very hot XD and sad indeed, at the end v_v that's why I want you to continue this~! ;P Love the other stories you've written here too, btw ;)
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was sad at the end, but hot at the beginning. I'm interested in seeing what happens next. :)