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for Knocked Up

by fyrbyrd074

person BreaXStrify
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT! I KNEW HE WAS THE FATHER! IT *has* TO BE VINCENT >< he was like...not phased...and then the metal mark...and the RED fabric...dude if it's someone else i need to brush up on my mystery reading figuring out skills v~v

YAY FOR CHAPTER 3! Now i shall wait eagerly for the flashback @.@!!!!

I do like the name Michael ^^ awww poor yazoo D; soled his soul for the sake and love of his son!


wonderful chapter ^^ can't wait for four ^^
person pink_angel_wings
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wait a minute - I think there should be a poll: how many peeps want Tifa to breast feed that kid. (j/k) (no, i'm kinda serious)
person raven
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell..... i want more.... please......
person Etrixan
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm... you said you'd reveal who the father is. I want to know if I'm right.
person pink_angel_wings
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was really hoping for a girl that looked like a little Yazoo and he could name her Yasmine. But this is still funny as hell. Now just the sperminating's left, right? ^_^ VINCENT = baby daddy
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao If it is Vincent's then thats gonna be one hell of a little hellion when that kid get older XD Kids gonna be demonic. Mini chaos' running around, I can see it now!
person pink_angel)wings
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, damn, I had a hard time reading this because I was LAUGHING so hard. From the looks of things around here (AFF & FF in particular), I'll bet the hospital in Midgar has an assload of experience dealing with mpregs. Anyway, I gotta keep reading ... LOL!!! Can't help it. Good premise.
person pink_angel_wings
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh-ahh! I can see Vincent's guilty face from here. OoOoO, he had to hit that. I'm betting on Mr. Valentine as the father. Am I right?
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
IT'S VINCENT. I know it is!!

-heavy breathing-

Yazoo seems like the calmest of them all, and he's the one who has it. XD
person Kerianya
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO! Yazzie can't give up his baby! He should marry Reno and they can bring up the beautiful little boy together and have an army of unspeakably cut offspring! Tifa will SMOTHER the baby - SMOTHER him!

I love MPreg too. I'm hoping to add it to one or two of the fics that I'm battling with. Keep up the good work with this one. Yazzie would make a great mummy.

As for the father, I'm putting my vote on Vincent. His reaction was a little too...comfortable for my liking.

Kerianya XxX