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for Smack My Bitch Up

by PervyYaoiFancier

schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yep... definitely porno music. *applauds* I love me some good Valenwind!!! That was really well written and I love Cid's ability to fuck with both Vincent and Chaos' heads at the same time. Makes me giggle in a stupid way. ^^
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Gotta love Chaos, that demon is so much fun....and it keeps getting Vince into...intereseting...situations as well. Loved it!
person Hasu
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD I love this! It has great dialogues, perfect badmouthed Cid and kinky smut. It's fantastic! I especially love this: ”I ain’t opposed to smackin’ a bitch if he’s outta line!” Amen Cid Highwind!

You have to write more, you do it so so very well.
person Fetherhead
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Butt-ered cleft hahahaha I loved this. had me snickering all the way through.
person lo
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
IIIII liked it. A lot. That was an interesting take on their relationship, goo thinking.