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by LadyVorlana

schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually read comedy... I like my sexy fanfics all to much.
But this held me to the end and I nearly choked laughing.
Round of applause and a whole internet for you lol
person DarkSacrifice
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg this was hilarious whahahahahah thank you so much and I hope you will post more chapters!awhahahaahah
god funny as hell! Love Vincent <3 looooooooooooooooooooooooveee VinceeeentXD
schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHA! I know I died laughing, poor Reno! Good job, I loved it!
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! How mean they were to poor Reno! I hope one of them followed him out!

Just 'cause his lines were cheap...Tsk.

Mind you, they do remain funny, no matter how many times you hear them ;-)
person DTE
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I loved it. Reno getting shot down by everyone with witty appropriate comebacks. I thought Shelke's and Shera's were the funniest though. I hope you plan to write more.
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man, how I love stories that make me go, 'poor Reno.'
person Kiheki
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*dies laughing* I could read this again and again!
person RJaneyP
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor horny Reno that was mean, well I'd take him home an Iron his shirt, for him! GRrrrrrrrrrr